怎样写申诉信？

如题！我要向GMAC申诉！应该侧重说什么？！！

我最后一句话是这么写的：我相信尊敬的pearson考试机构会给予我一个公正的答复，有哪位仁兄可以帮我翻译一下这句话？

我是这么写的：I sincerely hope that your honor pearson will give me a satisfying reply equitably and I believe I deserve another chance !

死马当活马医吧.这种机构都剧慢无比,你和它耗不起.专心二战吧.

To Whom It May Concern:

The GMAT application didn't working properly while I was taking the test on 23rd, 2006. The problem severely impacted my performance. Therefore, the test score can't fairly demonstrate my English proficiency due to the technical problem. I am just wondering whether you could cancel my score and give me another chance to take the test for free.

The application stopped working when I was taking the test of verbal part. It took the administrator several minutes to fix the problem. At the same time, I couldn’t help feeling nervous about the quality of the application. During the rest of the test, I was so worried about the application that I couldn't concentrate on my test at all. So I would like to ask you to give me another chance to compete with others under a fair condition.

Thanks for your time and looking forward to your fair decision.

对4楼的一点补充，the test score can't fairly demonstrate my English proficiency ——这句可以改进，GMAT实际上不是语言测试，虽然对于中国人来说，在某些方面是一个语言测试。

我发给GMAC的appeal letter,大家帮我看看。

Dear GMAC:

Hello! My name is **, and I am a chinese candidate. This morning(oct.23), I took GMAT in Pearson Professional Centers-Beijing. Everything went fine in the first two sections. After I finished the quantitative section I had a break to regain my psychological moment, however, when I came back to resume my verbal section, something strange happened:when I pressed the "next" button, a warning sign appeared instead of a question. I went for the test assistants, they were friendly and eager to help. Nevertheless, this problem was not resolved immediately, three assistants tried once but didn't succeed ,giving me an impression that it was a big problem and the quantitative section might be canceled! I suppose you could easily imagine the scenario that I was ready to resume but forced to stop and sat there watching them busily finding solution,which inevitably making me nervous! Although  this problem was finally fixed in several minutes ,it had greatly influenced my psychology and fettle. So, when I restart my verbal section,I was extremely nervous, and the heart beats was so fast that I could hardly concentrate on the test, and without saying ,I failed in the verbal section and scored only 25, nevertheless, the lowest score I have got in other simulate tests previously was 32(including GMATPrep,Kaplan). Consequentely, I consider this objective factor affected my final result tremendously and thus endangered my application competency!

Frankly speaking, the life for a candidate who have spent the past 3 month preparing the GMAT while maintaining a full-time intense job was apparently tough. All I want is a decent score to compensate for my efforts! Thus, I sincerely hope that your honor GMAC will give me a satisfying reply equitably and I stably believe I deserve another chance !

I swear my appeal is based on the authentic fact in accordance with the test assistant's report.

Yours Sincerely

**

挺不错的，尤其是真的考试与模考的巨大差异一段，就是对对方的要求不太明确。最好能让他们觉得对你太不公平了，觉得欠你的，不还不行，就比较成功了。

不过还是那句话，别抱太大希望。