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一战14分的写作水平真心求提高 求大神批阅

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发表于 2012-12-14 17:42:38 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Have you ever calculated how many people die per year because of car accident? Have you ever considered global warming when you are driving? Have you ever found it is more convenient for us to take railway to other city? If you have had such consideration before you may also agree that there will be fewer cars in use twenty years later. There are many reasons for us to reduce driving car.
At first, the crazy car use leads to a surprising number of car accident .As with the fast burgeoning of our society, more and more people own their private car. Of course, the car accident is happened more frequently. Some investigators have expressed that at least one car accident will be happened among a hundred cars per month. So people will reduce their car uses when they are already aware of the car accident.
In addition, the global warming is a problem which should be paid more attention to than car accident. The exhaust gas which is released by cars is a very important reason for global warming. And the global warming can lead to the abnormal climate and atmospheric pollutions which bring human a hard living environment. Less car use is the essential factor to make sure people a good life.
Although sometimes car looks like an indispensable tool, it is convenient for us to go outside by car. But as with the science development, there are more and more traffic tools which have been invented to take place the car. For example, the high speed rail. I took the high speed rail to go back home every vocation for many reasons. For example, the high speed rail is quicker and safer than car.
So maybe cars will take place by other traffic tools in the future.
In conclusion, since cars have so many disadvantages and are easy to be replaced, there must be fewer cars in use twenty years later.
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