求助，逗号加分词的形式一定都是状语修饰吗

aaudrey · 发表于 2015-5-3 11:44:46

在曼哈顿6版语法中，有提到带逗号的分词，不管是现在分词还是过去分词的结构都是做状语修饰的，但是og中在解释这种情况时，有时候逗号加现在分词说是修饰前面的名词。这样的话修饰名词不就变成定语了吗，还是说og中是想说做状语时，逻辑的主语应跟所修饰的部分主语是一致。
比如og13中104
104. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatri Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

This sentence awkwardly presents two phrases intended to modify Beatrix Potter and loses the clarity and logic of the meaning. In the original sentence, these modifiers sound choppy and create too much separation between the subject, Beatrix Potter, and the verb capitalized. Beginning the sentence with In her book illustrations and following that phrase with the relative clause which she carefully coordinated with her narratives allows the subject, Beatrix Potter, to be united with the verb, capitalized, for a stronger main clause.
A The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase; use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.这第一句的意思，是不是因为逗号分词的结构不是修饰名词。但语义上是想要修饰Beatrix。
B Phrase carefully coordinating ... illogically modifies the noun that immediately precedes it: book illustrations; Potter, not the illustrations, did the coordinating.这句说是修饰前面里 lustrations，但是按照曼哈顿6上面所说分词加逗号应该不是做定语修饰名词，所以糊涂了，，，还是og的意思是说这个修饰的逻辑不对。我个人理解用coordinating修饰时，主语应该是Beatrix，用coordinated修饰时，主语应该是illustrations.
C Correct. The correct placement of the modifying elements makes this sentence easier to understand; the use of which clearly links the two elements.
D Carefully coordinated ... absurdly modifies Beatrix Potter rather than her illustrations.
E The participial phrase does not clearly modify book illustrations; the relationships among the parts of the sentence are unclear.
The correct answer is C.

aaudrey · 发表于 2015-5-3 20:09:48

自己顶一下

柠檬茶小姐 · 发表于 2020-8-31 22:50:20

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求助，逗号加分词的形式一定都是状语修饰吗

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