刚写的第一篇仿写大作文，不知道是不是很糟……汗

还没有动手脱稿写，不过时间不多了，练习起来先。拜托各位了。。。不知道是不是很糟……

Do you agree or disgree with the following statement?
Subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child's basic education.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your oppinion.

Some parents believe that subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child's basic education. There is much discussion as to whether this is a beneficial way for a child's development. In order to decide, we must consider the advantages and disadvantages.

There are many advantages to children to learn an art subject. First, children will be more mature and concentrated when they are trained in an art class. This is beneficial to other subjects of their school study. And this is not only has the immediate effects on their children life, but also affects their personality later in life. Second, to have an art skill is a way to increase a child's self-confidence. When a child prensent the art skill to their buddy, they would be considered versatile and gain more acclaim. If one learn an art skill in his early life, he will learn about perseverance, goal setting, and how to present himself to others. All of these lessons will help one to become a happier, better adjusted adult.

There are also a few disadvantages to children spending time learning art subjects. For example, learning art subjects detracts from study time, which is very important. Modest training can help a child become more concentrated in their school study. But, over training, reducing their energy, may lead a contrary result in their normal studies. Another disadvantange is that children will be boring at learning art subjects if they are not willing to do this. Sometimes, it is the parents that push the children too hard at art learning, causing an unwillingness to participate due to a lack of enjoyment.

Overall, I think that learning art subjects is shine to a child's life. Maybe not every child who have taken an art subject will become a musican or an artist or an actor, but the art skill will be helpful on various aspects of their life. they can use the skill to entertain themselves and the people around them. At least they would have a more intense intuition when they appratiate an art product. All of these will open a window to a person to insight into the art world which can make their life more rich and colorful.

写得不错，反正比我好，呵呵

appratiate

 这个是什么词啊，你是想说appreciate吗？我觉得他后面那个art product，能换一个其他的词吗，art product有点难听（个人感觉）