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166. People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

It is an obvious difference that distinguishes adults from children either from the physical perspective or from the emotional perspective. No one can maintain just the same as what he or she looks like after having experienced a wide assortment of things. However, what events make a person an adult? I incline towards the graduation of high school. Among countless factors that influence the choice, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that the age of a high school graduate means an child begins to grow up and becomes more mature than before. Virtually, all the decisions depend on themselves, no longer their parents. For instance, if a student intends to go on studying in a college or university, he or she has to select a major according to the preference, hobby and some other actual factors while wanting to start to work, the decision totally relies on the choices he or she makes.

In addition, behind my opinion that the graduation of high school would make a person an adult lays an equally important fact that as a high school graduate, earning a life is not so difficult due to the adequate knowledge and relative experiences. Have accepted education for so many years, a high school graduate should have enough knowledge to live independently. Moreover, in my country China, on no account take up such cases a small proportion.

Last but not the least, it is important to point out that the ability to arrange the daily routine such as cooking, washing clothes and so on is absolutely attained by a high school graduate.

Taking into account all these factors above, we may reach the conclusion that the graduation of high school presents a significant step for every individual and make a person an adult.