AAI045,有了成仁的决心，还需要成功的勇气

没办法了，不管了，在丑的文章也要拿出来请NN指点了。

这是我的第3篇 Issue还是没什么提高，感觉issue真的不像argument那么好抓规律，还有10天考试，真急人，我看了很多范文还是没头绪，每个Issue都是那么有特色

The author states in the title statement that the most effective way for a businessperson to maximize profits over a long period of time is to follow the highest standards of ethics. While the statement has some merit, the issue is more complex than the speaker suggests. In my observation, the two objectives at times coincide but at other times conflict.

On some occasions, keeping high standards of ethics can benefit a business. Ethical companies usually earn a good reputation. The good reputation can turn to significant goodwill and thus bring an excess of profit. Moreover, high standard of ethics often stimulates employees’ morale, feeling of responsibility, and self-esteem, because they frequently connect themselves with the reputation and the performance of the company they working for proudly. Considered form aforementioned aspects, follow the high standards of ethics really can boom a business.

On the other hand, following highest standards of ethics might bring a cataclysm to a company. To my experience, a company has an inclination of cutting staff and downsizing while suffering from a great depress, thought the company has recognized that such actions may bring about a negative impact to a mass of family. But under the threat of bankrupt, most companies have to make the decision to fire a large portion of staff. Thought, such actions actually conflict the high standards of ethics, companies are different from charitable organization and the stockholder’s interest must be placed in first. On this kind of occasions, maximizing profits and keeping the highest standards of ethics are mutual exclusively.

From all the analysis I made above, I agree that following highest standards of ethics sometimes benefits a business, but it is hard to say that following highest standards of ethics is the most effective way to maximize profits. In some cases, ethical actions might hurt the interest of businesspersons.

今天比较困不看语法了，辛苦fish拉！

我从issue 整体的写法上面说一下吧。issue确实不如argument好写，原因就如yukon说的不好找规律。

我觉得你的水平已经不错了只要有足够的时间拿比较高的分数是肯定没有问题的。怎么才能给自己充足的时间写文章呢？由于题目的范围我们都知道所以要把构思在平时搞定。但是你已经快考拉是不是就来不及了呢？其实不要着急啊，建议如下：

1看到每个题目确定自己的观点

2如果是同意那么正文三段的内容就是正正反，反之就是反反正，如果是个别分析那么就是正，反，说一些不好下定论的套话。

3抓紧看黄金80，高频也就是高出现机会的题目呵呵。

谢谢版主，说实话：GRE（2002）,TOEFL（2004）,GMAT（2005）!熬得《指环王3》都拍完了，这是我铁人三项的最后一曲了。只能拼命，实在是不想有任何闪失！

说个...不知道算不算题外话，还想问问NN们，ISSUE的范文都是谁写的啊？GRE的遗风挺重，inexorable,homosexual,don(这个词很多老外都不懂，太古老，意思是“put on”）

我不是说范文不好所以我没写好，没那个意思，就是觉得有些太深奥

呵呵不是我昨天不给你改语法而是短时间找不到错误。

写的很不错了哦，加油字数再多点呵呵。

你说的范文的问题，我觉得也有可能啊。反正都是一些bt的机构在负责这些bt考试所以很有可能是一伙人写的。那些“大词”酌情用好了，不要用太多。让老师觉得你词汇很高又不会觉得你在鄙视他们就好了。

GG能不能开个帖子讲讲GRE同GMAT复习的策略差异尤其是作文的，问这个的很多。我对GRE只是略有了解回答的一直不是很好。等考完试好了，先忙考试呵呵。

谢谢版主的鼓励和建议！

嘻嘻~~yukon gg加油咯~~~我来不及看文章了~~先给你打打气再说~~

issue的范文好像来源自gemj大侠，好像写作提纲来自xdf的作文孙远？我不大记得了~~嘻嘻

gmat作文和gre不大一样，不需要用过于高级的词汇...只要把思路和结构明确就好~~

a za a za fighting...