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To build a community shopping center-yes or no

Since economics in our country developed more and more rapidly, a great many goods were produced, so we need a large community shopping center to display these products

Firstly, a shopping center makes our life more convinent,we don’t have to go to many places to gain different kinds of goods.

Furthermore, it is shopping center that makes our life efficiently. If a community shopping center built near our homes, we are able to buy goods which were in different places and were far away from the places that you live in the same place. Shopping center plays a crucial role in our daily life so that we can’t live without it.

In the end, not only community shopping center makes our life colourful,but also it let people who in the same community communicate more. They can argue what goods they bought ro something else.

Nothing can play so important role in our life than community shopping center. so if it were up to me decide whether to build a shopping center near my apartment, I would decide to build it. i was convinced believe that community shopping center can make our life more colourful.

谢谢各位大牛了!

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