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发表于 2005-1-18 11:54:00 | 只看该作者

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002 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


From a common standpoint,people would deem that parents played a very important role throughtout our life,espasially in study,and that also is my point.I will elaborate my views as follows.


For one thing,they teach us the most basic skills,such as speaking and walking,besides this, the knowlege gained from our parrents are more practical than those from books,because these knowlege came from their personal experence.We can apply such knowlege in real life.For example,book can't teach us how to face fail,how to calm down.But parents coud.They tell you how to face the fact,how to make you feel better when you feel miserable.


Another reason why i agree above statement is i believe that parents affect our world view to great extend.During character cultivation,they are the "enviroment"their attitudes will affect us greatly.For instance,You parents like playing chess,and play chess day after day,they talk about chess,they teach you how to play chess,and finally,you probably love this game


Last but not least,nobody knows you better than your parents do,they are the only persons we could fully trust.They provid us with much more individual attention than any other person.The fact is,teacher can't stare at you all the time in class,because there are not only one person in the class,teacher has to take care all students in class.But parents can satisfy wale afternoon to teach you how sum.


None can deny that parents will sacrifice a part of theirselves for the benefits of their children.We can draw a conclution as following,the best teacher is our parents.




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发表于 2005-1-18 18:54:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用require在2005-1-18 11:54:00的发言:

002 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


From a common standpoint,people would deem that parents played a very important role throughtout our life,espasially in study,and that also is my point 主题观点句最好用一个完整句表达.I will elaborate my views as follows.


For one thing,they teach us the most basic skills,such as speaking and walking,改句号。besides this, the knowlege gained from our parrents are more practical than those from books,because these knowlege came from their personal experence.We can apply such knowlege in real life.For example,book can't teach us how to face fail,how to calm down.But parents coud.They tell you how to face the fact,how to make you feel better when you feel miserable.


Another reason why i agree above statement is i believe that parents affect our world view to (a)great extend (extent).During character cultivation,they are the "enviroment" (wherein)their attitudes will affect us greatly.For instance,You parents like playing chess,and play chess day after day,they talk about chess,they teach you how to play chess,and finally,you probably love this game


Last but not least,nobody knows you better than your parents do,they are the only persons we could fully trust.They provid us with much more individual attention than any other person.The fact is,teacher can't stare at you all the time in class,because there are not only one person in the class,teacher has to take care all students in class.But parents can satisfy wale afternoon to teach you how sum.


None can deny that parents will sacrifice a part of theirselves for the benefits of their children.We can draw a conclution as following,the best teacher is our parents.


总体来说是一篇较好的文章,理由充分,语言简练。除了一些小错误外,主要的不足是有的地方(下划线处)逗号太多,断句不尽合理,加强对连接词的使用。

     


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板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-1-19 10:23:00 | 只看该作者

first, thanks for you help,my first one spent tons min,when i whan type,i found i have noting to say...


自己看着都觉得零散,在考场根本凑不出.写长句的话又有困难.


30分钟找着凑都难.


to sum up,need practise some typtical paragraphs,and use the style in twe.


remember..晚上早睡,早上早起..


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