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发表于 2013-12-15 21:23:01 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
保护环境.  为了下一代,政府保护野生动物是很重要的?In order to the next generation, it is important  government should  protect wild animals?
    .           ( 政府更应该专注于保护环境多于经济发展?我觉得这个题目差不多,所以下面括号里就是这个题目的大概理由啦~~~可能再加个就算发展经济,也不能破坏环境之类的..老师随便看一眼就行了!!!)
As time goes on,the issue of environment increasingly worrying.According to WSPA (the world organization for animal protection) data, there are 15 species become extinct every 15 minutes.As an inevitable consequence , the last extinct specie in the earth must be human,because we are also a member of biosphere .Therefore,in older to help ourselves, we must protect wild animals (环境).

Firstly,wild animal is a very important part of biosphere.Every specie keeps the ecological balance .If one specie die out,there would many other related species are extinction to follow it .Try to image the condition, a kind of birds dies out,then its predator a kind of eagles must be extinction because of hungry.Furthermore,the eagle’s predator must die out too.On the other hand,the prey of the bird would reproduce much more offspring.It would cause ecological unbalance .If according to the tendency,there is no doubt that the last distinct specie  is human.(自然环境是环环相扣的)
Secondly,there are many animal medicines to cure.Animal’s survive is closely related to humans life.If human want to let our next generation also use  animal to make some special medicine,we must let animals alive.Additionally,some people wear fur coat and use animal decoration.That is the reason why we must protect wild animals, they can bring us benefit.(如果是环境,可以说成植物药)
Finally,animal is humans friend.In order to survive, human have to eat animals which could only eat livestocks,not wild animals.In fact,human is also a kind of animals,thus we have responsibility to protect our family members--other animals.Have you ever had pets? I belive if you had pets, you must know your pets become your real friends.Animals  also have feelings which means happy and sad.We must eat some animals for nutrition, but if we want to protect wild animals,please only eat livestock to help our friends!(人类是地球的一员,请保护自然母亲,我们的家地球只有一个)
Based on the arguments offered above,which wild animal is  an important part of biosphere ,they can bring us benefit and they are our friends .In sum, I reinforce my stand point that it is very important that government should protect wild animals for the next generation.

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