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8.16独立写作：In the past young people are more depended on their parents in making decision. Today, young people are better able to make decisions in their own lives.
Few would disagree that young people today are the beneficiary of the myriad of the 21th century innovations. Yet has the Internet rendered them the ability to make judicious decisions by themselves? Has the televisions always taught them the right way to go about daily affairs? Has the ocean of information that invariably incurs strong allures ensured them to keep sober mind on their wishes? The answer might be negative. Young people, no matter when and where they might be, frequently depend on their parents to make wise decisions.
Much as we may pride ourselves on our sensible mind, teenagers are still far from the independency of parents’ financial support. For families that cannot afford boundless expenses, certain thoughts should be confined and remained until parents’ allowance. To be more specific, for a truly dedicated Doctor Who fan and a senior classical music lover like me, what could be more exhilarating than to be able be attend the Proms Concert with Doctor Who theme? My heart beaten faster at the thought of enjoying the familiar tones that appeared in the unforgettable episodes and played by the British royal orchestra, encountering like-minded people from all over the world, and even meeting my favorite doctor. However, I could not make the decision to make it real selfishly. A trip to London is an extra yet burdensome expenditure for my family and it was necessary to ask my parents for advice no matter how yearning I was to be there.
The dispersion of modern technology does not necessarily account to adequate experience, and in other words, thoughtful decisions. Adolescents are frequently misled by their peers via modern communicating platforms, as illustrated by the communication forums mushroomed on the Internet. My cousin once had a large quarrel with his classmates who had been bullying him. Yet instead of turning to his parents, he chose the school forum and many onlookers suggested him to gather friends and suppress violence with violence. This irrational and totally emotional scheme was finally spot by their parents and fortunately abolished. Therefore, even though the 21th century has witnessed great upheaval in information and technology, the young people’s mind can hardly emulate that of their hardened parents.
In conclusion, young people these days are still in need of their parents’ financial support and lacking significant experience to deal with living problems. Therefore, they can hardly make decisions on their own.
我总这么只写两个主体段真的可以么T^T……
听说托福比较喜欢字数多的？ |
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发表于 2013-8-16 12:56:16
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