It is a controversial issue that whether we should build a movie theater in our neighborhood or not. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern,(As far as I am concerned), I find that ~~ we may find some people support this plan depanding on their personal ~~, on the other hand, while some people oppose it. The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will agree that former one because it is more reasonable. For supporting it is more advisable than oppose that, my arguments listed as follows.(and there are three main reasons listed below.)
The essential reason can be seen by everyone is( It is clearly seen) that a lot of persons can enjoy the interesting movies, and they can go to the theater to know the latest fashion, maybe this is a better way to cost spend your free time to entertain your life than others. At the same time, it can show you the desirous world which always appear in your dream. So imagining if there is a movie theater in our neighborhood ,it will be wonderful. I think it will be wonderful if there is a movie theater in our neighborhood. In short, even though there are many different opinions concerning this topic, in my past, I also like to support this plan
Another reason for my propensity for supporting this plan is that we can make ourselves out of the big pressure which comes from the heavy work, huge cost of family and so forth , and then one of the effective way to relieve the pressure is to see the movies。The movies will not only lead you to find the feeling of immoral love, but it also bring you the courage from the film to count on the bright future. So as far as I concerned, supporting this significant plan is a wise choice.
Last but not the least ,building a large movie theater can increase the taxes of the government. That means the government are willing to take more money which they own to construct our neighborhood, maybe it will cause our community more and more beautiful. So in order to let our life become more colorful, I shall support this plan.
In conclusion, building a movie theater can benefit us , and entertain us as well. To sum up, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly commit to the notion than support it ,but not oppose it.
修改之處進僅是我各人看法,僅供參考,我也只是學生,非英語老師
建議:先加強基礎文法,作文用字不在多,不在難,再描述有效率
寫太多多餘的句子,贅句雖然你用ㄌ不少單字,可試用的不是很正確
沒有persons 用在這裡的文章吧,people
開始寫作不要參考模版,會寫的四不像
最後在考試潛在確定模版即可
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