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93. Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
首段：外表重要，但是内心也很重要；
第二段：内心重要，举了Platoon, Lincoln, MacClintock三个人的例子来说明内心重要；
第三段：转折，说明外表也同样重要，拿Napeolon Hill的例子来说明外表的重要性；
末端：总结全文
Whether should one be judged by appearance or inner reality or truth has become an ambiguous question insofaras the contemporary society. As an old proverb once said, the good first impression wins half battle; the appearing image plays an important role to success. However, just as truly as the industry is the price of noble, the content beneath image also counts for a great deal alongside achievement. Though concentrating on the surficial appearance may help us precede on the battlefield, cultivating the inner essence process the key to victory.
The content behind appearance endowed with the marrow of immortality, which does not decay or fall into oblivion. If Socrates, the famous ancient philosopher, had devoted his whole life to the misery of mundane appearance instead of seeking the infinite treasure of philosophy, he would never have the chance to cultivate his disciple Platoon, never left the world profound thoughts. If Martin Luther King, the outstanding African-American Civil Right Movement leader, worried about the assaults or mockeries he may confront because of the color of his skin, he would never have the chance to give the impressive lecture in front of Lincoln Memorial in Washington D.C. If Barbara McClintock, the legendary scientist of 20th century, laborately dressed up herself to alleviate the discrimination of bias, she would never found the magical gene transposons within maize, never give the world a stun on the stage of the awarding of Nobel Prize. Without their nourishing a keen heart, the world would be trapped even fell into unfathomable abyss.
However, as the appearing process an indispensible position, it cannot be treated neglectfully. An appropriate dress reflects the accomplishment and elegant taste within the people, which may indicate the potential for inestimable achievement. Wearing fitness clothing, Napoleon Hill successfully acquired the credit of book productor, published his first commentary and earned him the first pot of gold. Learned how to appear property may open you the gate to accomplishment.
Just like Socrates said, time is of no great accounting but to dispel illusions and leave essences. Rosy cheeks may decay, but the pure spirit would never evanesce. Thus, while we fostering an ideal appearance, cultivating an immortal content is the eclectic method to pave a complanate road to Rome.
最后弱弱的问句，考试时候是不是也是每段首字母要大写？这个要自己来弄吗？那样岂不是很慢。。
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