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发表于 2012-10-13 20:18:39 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
22. Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.


Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.


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In this claim, the speaker asserts that if a person want to understand the character of a society, he/she has to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models, for the reason that heroes and role models may represent the society's highest ideals. According to my own observations and experiences, I would agree with this claim and reason used to support it to some degree, however, sometimes, especially in nowadays, when the truly definition of a hero is confused and uncertain, we can not use this claim to cover all the respects.


Before we going through the validity of this claim and reason, we should first understand what is a hero for a nation or a society. As for me, I think, a real hero which can represent a whole nation should be supported and acknowledged by more than half of its people, who are basis of one society and consist the wisdom and mores of it. Once a person is selected by the virtually all the people, he/she will be the one contains the fundamental will of the nation and reflect the character of it. For example, George Washington, the father of the United States, who no doubt is the whole nation's hero, represents America's will of chasing for the democracy, freedom, and equality for all the times. Also, Martin Luther King who are the model of a large group in America, represents the endless determination of fighting against discrimination. In this respect, we can use the reason that those who reveal a society's highest ideals can reflect a nation's character to support the claim.


However, as we all know that, the hero chosen by the public may sometimes indeed represents the highest ideals, he/she may just be a hopeful and desire objective used as a goal and motivation to stimulate those common people fight for their dreams. All of the heroes are just the minorities which can not represent the entire society. For example, many American fellows set Bill Gates, Warren Buffett as their heroes, motivating them fight for their future, however, it does not mean that present America is fulfilled with millions of successful leaders and investors. There are still poverty and starvation all over the United States.


Also, nowadays, the definition of hero chosen by different people becomes more and more comprehensive and one-sided which, in another word, not on the behalf of the highest ideals of a society, can not represent the whole thoughts of the society.  An athlete can be selected as someone's hero for the merely reason that he help the team win the Superbowl Game. Also, a shining singer can be chosen as a great deal of people's super star for people's craving for his/her luxurious life. All of these as I just listed can not represent the entire country's or society's character


In sum, when considering about whether one hero can be used to examine one society, we should see whether he/she was supported by most persons in one society, otherwise, he/she merely just a hopeful dream or individual preference which are not the highest ideals of the people and can not represent the whole nation or society.

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沙发
发表于 2012-10-14 02:25:21 | 只看该作者
, otherwise, he/she merely just a hopeful dream or individual preference which are not the highest ideals of the people and can not represent the whole nation or society.

which 应该用who?

are 应该是is?
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-16 20:12:08 | 只看该作者
哦对,当时写晕了,谢谢
地板
发表于 2012-10-16 21:37:07 | 只看该作者
by the virtually all the people?
有点疑问的是,你自己对英雄的定义到底是怎么定义的,不会真的要靠民主投票半数通过的形式吧。个人觉得英雄在现代社会很难说做到对整个有多大的影响,只能说实在自己的领域做得很色,就可以称之为英雄,比如说拳王阿里,比如说乔布斯,比如说姚明或者刘翔。
再有一个疑问是,你对一个社会的特点是怎么理解的,是不是一定就是英雄们的作为,普通老百姓能否代表
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-18 11:19:25 | 只看该作者
谢谢了竹林,其实我当时是想写大部分情况下社会的根本特点是老百姓的行动所代表的,而不是个别英雄代表的,但是感觉没时间了,就没加了,我这篇文章思路好混乱,你有没有感觉我第二个观点有点牵强,我都不知道怎么表达好了。。。
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