特级小菜真心求改

aven501 · 发表于 2012-9-25 23:37:19

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Colleges and universities should offer student a better job preparation before they start working.

With the development of society, all students want to get good preparation before they start working. If colleges and universities offer student a better job preparation before they start working, it will help both the college or university, and students. So I totally agree with the question.

First, student can fit in society well and prepare more for his or her first job. Nowadays, under the pressure from family and society, more and more students choose to have a job which can get more money. They are confused because they don’t really like the job. However, when colleges and universities offer students a better job preparation, students can have a clear plan for their future. And the job preparation can help students fin the job they really want to have, the job which they are really interest in. As a result, students will get ready for their working life and have a bright future.

At the same time, a better job preparation can bring the college or university benefits, such as money. A good job preparation can bring students on the track on job choosing and preparing. Which means students from that school will have more possibility to get a job, even get a good job. When the news of most of students which graduated from this school can get good job spread to the society, more students will come and study in this school, as a result, the college or university will be rich.

Admittedly, offer a better job preparation for students will cost a lot of money. But the effect of supporting the good job preparation will be high employment rate and good social impact. As a result, more and more students will come to that college, students feedback when they are rich, and school will get more money from students.

Above all the reasons i have mention, i agree with colleges and universities should offer student a better job preparation before they start working.

fuzhengrui · 发表于 2012-9-26 20:33:36

aven501 · 发表于 2012-9-26 22:53:16

真心感谢！！！

aven501 · 发表于 2012-9-26 22:58:00

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People now are easier to become educated than the past.

Nowadays, people are richer and have more freedom than before. With the development of technology, getting educate is much easier than the time people have to go to school so they can gain knowledge. In my opinion, i agree with the topic that people now are easier to become educated than the past.

First, people now can have more ways to be educated. The Internet developed fast than we thought, people’s life cannot leave internet even one day. And it gave us great help on education. Internet is the smartest thing in the world, any questions we have on studying, we can search them on internet. For example, when students have question about calculus, they just need to look it up on Youtube. There are many videos made by teachers, professors and those people who are good at it. Those videos are interesting and easy to understand, much better than we take long time to read a book and we might still stuck on the question.

Never less, the education system has been developed. Our education we have is much better than before. We have more colleges and universities. And the number of students colleges and universities enrolled is keep increasing every year. Thank for the developed education system, people in the States can get free education until they graduate from high school. And because of the developed education system, students can study abroad so they can get better education and live a better life.

What’s more, we have a more peace world. Most of the countries are in peace, students can be calm and focus on their school. They don’t need to worry about their family and themselves like before. They only need to do good job at school and make a better future for themselves.

In conclusion, i agreed about people now are easier to become educated than the past.

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