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问一道PREP语法,敬请大牛小牛指导!

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发表于 2012-4-11 23:15:12 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to

weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this

robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.



(A) Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to

weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(B) Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated

to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress

(C) According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated









to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress

(D) Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to

weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed

(E) Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to

weave a new woolen robe for dressing  



考点:逻辑表达(Logical Predication句子结构(Grammatical Construction)、平行对称

Parallelism

1)分词短语在句首起状语作用,逻辑主语等于句子主语

2) indicate that…and that构成并列的宾语从句

3)在正式书面语中,宾语从句中的that通常不能省略



(A) young Athenian women作为Based on…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑;未划线部分的and that从语

法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new woolen robe,不符合逻辑.

(B)逻辑主语错误;未划线部分的and that没有并行的对象;关系代词which后应该接句子,  

(C) young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑;未划线部分的and that

语法上跟that they used…平行,共同修饰a new woolen robe,不符合逻辑

(D)正确,句首没有使用分词短语,有效的避免的逻辑主语问题;indicate that…and that构成了宾语

从句的并行结构

(E)未划线部分的and that没有平行的对象;indicate thatthat不能省略;for doing表示目的不及to

do有效.


请问大家这道题,解释中红色部分不大懂诶,我查了下灵格斯关于according to和based on的一些例句(附在下面),还是没觉得红色解释部分有什么道理,不知道大家怎么理解呢



灵格斯例句:Accordingtothis principle (which is based in research), people perceive more aesthetically pleasing designs as easier touse than less aesthetically pleasing designs, regardless of actual functionality.

Basedoninformation gleaned from stakeholders, SMEs, and literature reviews, designers need to create a hypothesis that serves as a starting point in determining what sorts of users and potential users to interview.





灵格斯例句:Accordingtothis principle (which is based in research), people perceive more aesthetically pleasing designs as easier touse than less aesthetically pleasing designs, regardless of actual functionality.

Basedoninformation gleaned from stakeholders, SMEs, and literature reviews, designers need to create a hypothesis that serves as a starting point in determining what sorts of users and potential users to interview.


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沙发
发表于 2012-4-12 09:05:20 | 只看该作者
Manhattan里对based on的解释:

BASED ON
RIGHT:       The verdict was BASED ON the evidence.
The jury reached a verdict BASED ON the evidence.
WRONG:    BASED ON the evidence, thejury reacheda verdict.
(The jury was not itself BASED ON the evidence.)

所以句意应该是后面整句所指代的,关于young Athenian women的活动都是based on records from ancient Athens的,而是只有主语based on吧
板凳
发表于 2012-4-12 09:13:48 | 只看该作者
其实我觉得不太严格来讲,based on是可以的,至少ACCORDING TO是可以用的
但ABC都不对主要是因为and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.没有并列对象,只有改写成indicate that才满足并列
地板
发表于 2012-4-12 21:41:18 | 只看该作者
og上有一道类似的也是关于 based on 的逻辑主语问题,og上说,based on...修饰的是后面分局的主语,在这里也就是women,但显然这里women和base不base没关系,是这个fact (each year young Athenian women collaborated to



weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena )base在records上。
og原话:The underlined phrase is a modifier; it functions
as an adjective to describe the noun that
immediately follows it
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-13 20:46:28 | 只看该作者
谢谢,蛮有道理的。
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-13 20:47:39 | 只看该作者
嗯,现在看来理解了,当初我觉得AC里面不是也有个that嘛,现在想想这两个that跟后面并列是讲不通的
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-13 20:48:09 | 只看该作者
谢谢!
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