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[issue] 新g issue 31 求拍~

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发表于 2012-2-1 13:47:48 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
31) Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

Since life is a miracle and all is dependent on each other in the nature, it is reasonable for society to make efforts to save endangered species. However, human activities which potentially result in extinction of those species are aim for our economic development which is an important part of social development. Thus society should consider how to realize sustainable development,  saving endangered species which are necessary for ecological balance and at the same time keeping economic development which is a basis for people's life.

Life is equal and we human being is just a part of natural chain, however, the original vulnerable ecological balance is being destroyed by our greedy and ignorance.Under the humans' power, the ecological balance that the nature organized for several billion years has been broken. More and more species are in danger to become extinct since many human activities which have detrimental for species such as deforestation, land reclamation, killing of animals... For instance, the matter of oil spill in gulf of Mexico, ignoring the international community's strong condemning Japan's killing a large number of whales ... All these lead more and more species in the ocean to become extinct.

From the industry revolution, although people have a powerful strength to change the nature for economic development, what the following are various forms of pollution such as air pollution, water pollution,solid pollution and so on. All these bring a large detrimental effect to the earth where people depend on to live. And people are revenged by the nature: air pollution has a bad effect on people's health; the climate's always changing make people uncomfortable; the trend of submerged land as the sea level has been rising threatens people who live near those lands to give up their homes...

However, sometimes people have to do these activities for economic development which is a basis for people's better life. Look back to agricultural era, compared to the industrial age, there must be much fewer endangered species, however, people that time did not have such a good life as people in the industrial age accordingly. With the development of times, people tend to live a better life and at this progress, to some degree it is necessary to do some activities which potentially result in extinction of some species. Take forests as an example. People used paper which made from forests instead of using heavy bamboos to record things. It had more detrimental effect on endangering forests, however, at the same time it was more convenient for people to record things.    In fact, it is an inevitable trend from agricultural era to the industrial age and to some extent it is inevitable to pay the cost of scarifying some species.  

In conclusion, to some extent, it is reasonable for society to make efforts to save endangered species which are necessary to ecological balance, since it is because not only that people should not deprive any species' right to life, but people's life also depend on this vulnerable ecological balance. However, it is an inevitable trend to develop economy to live people a better life which sometimes must pay the cost of scarifying some species. The best way is to make a balance between them, thus making the development be sustainable.  


 
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沙发
发表于 2012-2-1 21:12:59 | 只看该作者
我觉得你的观点对你不利。美国人特喜欢动物很自然。
板凳
发表于 2012-2-2 12:25:21 | 只看该作者
感觉观点有点不清楚,到底是支持还是反对都没说
地板
发表于 2012-2-2 13:49:03 | 只看该作者
Since life is a miracle and all is dependent on each other in the (omit, THE) nature, it is reasonable for society to make efforts to save endangered species. However, human activities which >would< potentially result in extinction of those (certain) species are aim for our economic development which is an important part of social development (i think you might need to rephrase this underlined part because it was very unclear). Thus society should consider how to realize (create) sustainable development,  saving endangered species which are (is) necessary for ecological balance and at the same time keeping economic development which is a basis for people's life.

Life is equal and we human being(s) is (are) just a (the) part of natural chain, however, the original(ly) vulnerable ecological balance is being destroyed by our greedy (greed) and ignorance.(space)Under the humans' power, the ecological balance that the nature organized for several billion years has been broken. More and more species are in danger to become extinct since many human activities which have detrimental >effects< for species such as deforestation, land reclamation, (replace COMMA with AND) killing of animals... For instance, the matter of oil spill in >the< gulf of Mexico, ignoring the international community's strong condemning Japan's killing a large number of whales(NO SPACE) ... All these lead (led) more and more species in the ocean to become extinct.

From the industry (industries) revolution, although people have a (omit, A) powerful strength to change the nature for economic development, what (omit, WHAT) the following are various forms of pollution such as air pollution, water pollution,solid pollution and so on. All these bring a large detrimental effect (affect) to the earth where people depend on to live. And people are revenged by the nature: air pollution has a bad effect on people's health; the climate's always changing make people uncomfortable; the trend of submerged land as the sea level has been rising threatens people who live near those lands to give up their homes...

Liked it quite a bit. Keep it up
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发表于 2012-10-7 22:44:54 | 只看该作者
中间那两端看着好纠结啊,你都是在说破坏啊什么的,没有证据证明应该保护还是不应该保护啊!!
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发表于 2013-10-3 18:07:06 | 只看该作者
Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.

和你说的economic development似乎有些出入,毕竟不是所有人类活动都和经济有关;而且别人重点在于是否与人类活动有关,你不要扯什么生态,除非你证明两者是exclusive的
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