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定好时间写的一篇独立写作。。求高人批改。thanx

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发表于 2011-11-18 17:20:27 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
we may not aware of this but increasing evidence has claimed that this statement is true. in the past pets were a kind of luxury only raised in rich families but things were definitely changed in recent decades. More people raise pets especially in city and I would like to render my view in three aspects.

Just like what it seems One big group of pets owner is the old people who may treat pets as their only companion. as we know people today prefer to have less children than the past especially in china we have the population policies which significantly limited the number of family member. Most couples would only have one child through their life then comes the problem that when our parents retired they could only rely on one child what’s more With the booming of our economic. the youngster is living with more and more burden so to survive from the living stress people needs to devote more to their works which may be different in the past . less time would be available for us to stay with our parents and then a pet may be to best choice to help us bring joys to olds.

Moreover .an increasing trends to keep a pet in young people is also draw our attention . modern people live in a more and more closed way which may seems opposite to what we see. But it is the truth we have no brothers or sisters and neighbors may just stranger who may don’t know each other’s name meanwhile a tremendous of people leave their hometown and family to a more modern city for a shinning future and all those factors would contribute to the widespread lonely in people at large. Below this kind of situation we need some thing to fulfill the demand in emotion and pet come to our life even more play an indispensable role to some degree.

Lastly, a booming in service for pets push those pet owners to increase their cost on pets. For example some owners need to buy food for their pets as well as beautify clothes which always very expensive what’s more a newly developed business called pet-beauty also absorbed a lot of money. And in those special shops we can dye their hair or maybe change a hairstyle for them ; but no matter what those owner would love to send money on their pet.

Just draw a conclusion to all the stuff I described above. Even though there is hundreds and thousands of ways for us to make a full use of money people still love to using it on pets because they need pets also enjoy raising a pets.
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-11-18 17:22:38 | 只看该作者
忘记打题目了
同不同意下列观点。
虽然用钱的方法有很多,但是越来越多的人花钱养宠物
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