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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

   In my country, many people believe that buying houses or apartment, or other kinds of real estate is better than purchasing a business, because most of Chinese people anticipate that the price of real estate would sharply rise in the next twenty years. However, in my opinion, purchasing a business is much more worthwhile than buying real estate for the reason below.

The most important reason for me to believe purchasing business is more worthy than purchasing a house is that a business brings not only the profit but also experience and network which could lead you to a more successful future career. A house could just be rent to consumers in  the house-renting market or be lived by your own family. But to be a business leader, no matter it is a very small business like a small fast-food restaurant, or a bigger one, such as an investment bank, you could gain management experience. Through running the business, and executing business operations, you also gain the experience and insight knowledge of the industry. For example, if you purchase a small corporation that runs a retail IT products web sites, you will learn the retailing business, IT market and web site construction at the same time. It could benefit your future career if you are going to enter the IT industry. Furthermore, you set goals for the crew, find ways to solve business problems. As a result you also gain valuable management experience. All of these experiences you gain are advantages after you buying business, but not a house.

Well, some people could challenge my opinion that a business could fail and we may lost our investment. Admittedly, many businesses, especially small businesses go into bankruptcy every year and investors surfer from these. But we can not conclude that we will take more risk when we buying business than when we buying houses. In the world today, the financial crisis endangers not only businesses but also the real estate market. In some economic, the price of real estate has fallen over 50 percent. The sub prime mortgage loan crisis make people understand that buying a house can also devour your wealth especially when price of a house is extraordinary high.

In conclusion, if I have money to decide whether to buy a business or to purchase real estate as a investment choice, I would rather buy a business in a reasonable price.