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51 Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or
chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

(1) In
my opinion, I tend to believe that success comes from careful planning. Since
people are more likely to benefit from the careful planning so that they can
better prepare for the future success in several aspects.

First,
careful planning enables people to make better use of time. If you have a
careful plan, you could reach your final success through specific steps. Then
you are able to work in a more efficient way. And at the same time, you will have
enough time to do the most important thing.

Second,
careful planning provides people with more confidence especially when people
encounter difficulties and other kinds of uncertainties. Everyone’s career
filled with countless uncertainties, if you have no careful planning, once you encounter
difficulties, people are easy to become upset. Instead, if you have careful
planning for every kind of possibilities, you will become more cooled rather
than depressed.

Third,
it goes without saying that careful planning better bridges the gap between
taking risks and the final success. No one understands the distance between
taking risks and final success. The Venture Capital investment (VC) best exemplify
the fact. Only the bravery of taking risks is not enough, VC still need your
careful planning.

Accordingly,
careful planning helps people distribute time more reasonably, provides people
with more confidence, and bridges the gap between taking chances and final
success. In one word, if you are eager to succeed, based on the hard working,
you’d better have a careful plan.