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求作文指导-基础课程中是否应该加如艺术类课程

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发表于 2008-9-21 12:09:00 | 只看该作者

求作文指导-基础课程中是否应该加如艺术类课程

这是DELTA里的一个作文题目,请帮忙指导下哪些地方怎样写可以更好些, 还有我这样的作文大概能拿多少分呢? 先谢谢了!

 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I am in favor of the statement that subjects such as art, music, and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education. I think, any education or economy development, in the end, is to improve people life.

 

Firstly, we have an old saying that only study makes Jack a dull boy, this means we should not only ask the children to study the book knowledge, instead, we should give them more chances to learn something different, so can develop a life more colorful and meaningful. To put the art, music etc into the basic education provides children chances to contact and touch a variety of interest.

 

Secondly, each one in this world has his own talent, for example, some people are good at singing; some people are good at dancing; still some others are talented in painting. We can’t say everybody is suite for normal study like math, chemistry etc. To put art, music, and even dance into children’s basic education can help the parents to discover what kind of talents their children possesses in his early age, so they can stress to foster them in this field.

 

Thirdly, to put art, music and drama into child’s basic education is a good way to help children to cultivate their sense of aesthetics. For example, an art course can teach them to enjoy a painting work, even to create their own sketch; music course can help a student to enjoy the beauty of a rhythem. If further education in these field can provided, may be there is a new famous painter or singer established. Who knows? 

In a whole, to put art, music and drama etc into the child’s basic education can help the whole society set up the aesthetic sense. Nowadays, most educator and parents have already realized the importance in art, music and other aesthetic courses, and many schools made revolution to change their course structure, I think this is a great progress in the education history, and it does benefit generations of children.

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