自认为牛b的一篇文章

Hardly any one never heard about china（该用倒装吧，hardly does anyone never heard about....）, a delicate while vulnerable artwork. One born out of thousands（费解）. The combination of wit and effort, art and culture.I think it most represent the characteristics of Chinese, from its born to its immortal.

Forming, a delicate step that requires patient and technique. No aggressive , no extraordinary, mud being distributed equally.（这两句都没说完，没谓语） This is a typical example for china’s conservative and moderate （该加个宾语中心语 character，要不改成conservationism）, the notion that no one should be better, and I am not better.（老外可能不懂哦） the patient that embedded in （be embeded  in sth）Chinese make them more moderate and careful.（prudent 或者deliberate更好一些）

Carving and painting, a fantastic procedure that represent the work of art, kindness, subtle sentiment, delicate and elegant（并列结构，elegance，delication）. The 5000 thousands（5000 thousand，thousands 表示成千上万的） years’ culture root in every Chinese’s mind, the beauty of being noble, the honor of being chosen by the king（中国的不叫king，叫emperor）, the subtle emotion of every Chinese, all these make them cherish the（the...） art, focusing on the（同上） details, a kind of art that differ from western’s grave and brutal.（noun form）

Burning, （不是burning）the final and even the most important step, which decides the success or failure of a china. Follow the instructions came from our experience and being（be） flexible in case any unpredictable issue happening. That（this呈上，that启下） is what we have been called the experiencist, （in contrast）we pay more attention to what had happened while westerns more likely prone to predict the future. That（It） does not mean we are not innovative, we can do things better by following our predecessor’s print and  being responsible to ourselves, walk a way that is different but straight.

Every step of producing a china, represent the notions and virtues of the whole nation, and china should be remembered by china(iniatial）

 Hardly did i have time or vigour，but what i found  is appreciable grammar mistakes and the structure which may seem not to be revelent to the TWE.However, the naiive always do so as you .

 Best wishes all the same。