没看TWE之前,我把第一题的四大类型基本上以这种方式来写: (8)Describe the season you like most.
As far as I am concerned, summer is definitely my favorite season. For one thing, I prefer the warm weather to cold weather. In summer I can wear so much beautiful skirt, but in other seasons I have to put on plenty of clothes to start getting warmer. Besides, I like to be outside, in summer there are a lot of enjoyable activities I can do, such as swimming, climbing, boating and so on, but in other seasons especially in winder I have to stay at home because it’s too cold. And finally, my birthday is in summer, each year I will have a happy birthday party with my friends and my parent. So, I love summer more than other seasons.
然后我看了TWE后准备第二题的时候就成这样了:
(1) Some think that study life in university is very important, others believe that it is not so. What do you think and why?
I strongly agree with the point that study life in university is indispensable. For one thing, before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree, people can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, but they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. Another thing is that a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field. College graduates are not more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command two or three times higher salaried than applicants who lack college diplomas. 我真是狂晕了,分明是六级作文啊。而且我发现根本开不了口,就算我说出来了,我还怀疑这么书面话的语言老外会不会听的很不舒服,我在写下面的话题的时候稍微注意了一下,但还是觉得不如第一题准备的那样口语化,感觉象在写四级作文。
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