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我的口语的第一二题,求拍,并请牛人指点

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楼主
发表于 2007-8-21 11:04:00 | 只看该作者

我的口语的第一二题,求拍,并请牛人指点

没看TWE之前,我把第一题的四大类型基本上以这种方式来写:

(8)Describe the season you like most.

 

 

    As far as I am concerned, summer is definitely my favorite season. For one thing, I prefer the warm weather to cold weather. In summer I can wear so much beautiful skirt, but in other seasons
   
I have to put on plenty of clothes to start getting warmer. Besides, I like to be outside, in summer there are a lot of enjoyable activities I can do, such as swimming, climbing, boating and so on, but in other seasons especially in winder I have to stay at home because it’s too cold. And finally, my birthday is in summer, each year I will have a happy birthday party with my friends and my parent. So, I love summer more than other seasons.

然后我看了TWE后准备第二题的时候就成这样了:

(1)    Some think that study life in university is very important, others believe that it is not so. What do you think and why?

 

 

I strongly agree with the point that study life in university is indispensable.

For one thing, before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree, people can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, but they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite.

Another thing is that a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field. College graduates are not more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command two or three times higher salaried than applicants who lack college diplomas.

     我真是狂晕了,分明是六级作文啊。而且我发现根本开不了口,就算我说出来了,我还怀疑这么书面话的语言老外会不会听的很不舒服,我在写下面的话题的时候稍微注意了一下,但还是觉得不如第一题准备的那样口语化,感觉象在写四级作文。


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-21 11:26:00 | 只看该作者

大家帮帮忙啦~~~~~~~~~我写的这种第二题~~如果发音没有问题的话,符不符合ETS的标准ne~~~

我看了OG了,但是还是不敢确定。

板凳
发表于 2007-8-21 13:15:00 | 只看该作者

如果能顺利说出来的话 应该能拿高分

但是建议lz不要这么联系 要求太高了 万一考试遇到新题 很有可能会紧张的说不出来

(不过你要是时间很够 能够反复强化也行)

最好还是用简单点的句式 模式化的答题

1、2 主要是看你的表达能力

越自然自信越好

地板
发表于 2007-8-21 14:03:00 | 只看该作者
As far as I am concerned这句话我觉得有点老了,我身边的老外基本都不说这句话的
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-21 14:28:00 | 只看该作者

恩,我上XDF的时候老师给的,我从中挑了一个不长不短的就用了。恩,希望mcyoo进一步指点~~~

前天去party影响他们好像说personally, I think~~~不记得了~~

哦,还有非常感谢3楼icyfirechen帮助~~~

6#
发表于 2007-8-21 15:14:00 | 只看该作者

好说~

本人自认为在口语上校有心得

虽然第一次考得不好

但是准备的还不错

论坛里有不少我的精华贴

愿意与大家分享!

7#
发表于 2007-8-31 11:48:00 | 只看该作者

IF你能把这个原文很顺利地背诵出来,应该有30分,NO KIDDING!!!

不用担心是否口语话或者书面话,ETS不是要求必须SLANY ENOUGH,ANYWAY, IT IS ACADEMIC SPEAKING, NOT SHOOTING BREEZE AT CAFETERIA

8#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-31 12:46:00 | 只看该作者

哦?~~~真的吗?~~~~

我当时第二题写了4篇就不敢写下去了,现在在狂练语音语调~~~

背熟对我来说是没问题的,就是害怕像Ls说的那样一旦有新题型什么的我可能反应不过来就完了~~~~

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