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这种话题我真不知道该写些什么 请大家赐教TWE03

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楼主
发表于 2006-12-7 23:15:00 | 只看该作者

这种话题我真不知道该写些什么 请大家赐教TWE03

 

 

With the large improvement of the technology of preserving food, the food gradually becomes easier for people to prepare. Faced with this situation, many people wonder that this will prevent the progress of the eating culture; others argued that it will have some advantages through this development. As to me, the easier food preparation will bring a lot of merits to our lives.

 

 

 

 

As the produce of the food preparation has been simplified, most women can have an extra time to do what they like. In the past, housewives were reluctant to prepare the food for the whole family. They had to think about what they may have on breakfastlunch and dinner, moreover, what they needed to concern was the dairy diet of the meals. They should be care about not only the diversity of everyday meals, but also the nutrient of the each dish. However, things have been entirely different now. Food can be sold accompanying with the ingredients in the supermarket. The only thing for the wives to do if they want to select the dish is the pick up the well-prepared food into their baskets. This will really save a lot of time for the women who accustomed to accumulate the food in the dirty market shop by shop. They can do other things such as reading books, watching televisions, or just sleeping to relax themselves in the increasingly pressure society.

 

 

 

 

The another facilitate of the well-prepared food is, sometimes, it provide an opportunities to the men who are singles to prepare the food by their own. Take a single, white collar workman named Jack for example: Jack is worked in a large bank and the life of him only saturate with busy. Every night he goes back to home in exhaustion. Though usually he feels hungry, the only thing he willing to do was not cook himself but to go to bed. He would rather hungry than to do the complex cook. Obviously, the new convenient way of the food preparation brings Jack a hope. Today he can easily to have the pre-preparation food in a quick time. Then, after devouring it, he would have a satisfying sleep to relax himself and obtain the enough energy for tomorrow’s work. The benefits of all sorts of these people are all attributes to the easier food preparation.

 

 

 

 

In a word, although, the easier way might hinder the development of the eating culture to some extent, in this rising-paced world, people will willing to enjoy this types of the food preparation. And this will definitely bring a progress of facilitate in other fields simultaneously and make our lives more efficiency and interesting.   


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-7 23:16:00 | 只看该作者

对不起 

题目是

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

板凳
发表于 2006-12-7 23:45:00 | 只看该作者
楼主字数上很有优势,注意下小错误高分不是问题了。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-12-8 22:11:00 | 只看该作者

只有字数上吗?

结构上有什么不妥的地方吗?用词方面呢???

请赐教...

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