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一篇自己翻译的文章,请大侠们帮助指点指点,感谢!

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楼主
发表于 2006-3-27 00:03:00 | 只看该作者

一篇自己翻译的文章,请大侠们帮助指点指点,感谢!










天津将重点发展以RFID为核心的应用软件









    据新华社报道,天津市市长戴相龙在近日召开的天津市十四届人大四次会议上指出,"十一五"期间,天津将从培育自主品牌、推进高新技术产业化、发展软件产业等方面开发高新技术产业。
    戴相龙说,"十一五"期间,天津将按照产业化、集聚化、国际化的方向,以增强自主创新能力为核心,加快技术创新,培育自主品牌,提高分工层级,扩大产业规模。
    首先,培育自主品牌。建立信息安全、电动汽车、细胞工程、中药现代化、重型机器装备等10个重大产业技术平台,大力开发具有自主知识产权的关键技术和核心技术。在集成电路、智能化仪器仪表、新能源等领域取得重大突破,引导企业对移动通信、节能及环保等引进技术进行消化吸收再创新,形成一批填补国内空白的技术。积极实施品牌战略,培育20个在国内外有一定影响、具有自主知识产权的知名品牌,形成30家具有自主知识产权、年销售收入5亿元以上的优势高新技术企业。
    其次,推进高新技术产业化。戴相龙强调说,要巩固电子信息、新能源等优势高新技术产业,发展生物技术、环保节能、纳米等新材料、海洋科技、民航科技等战略高新技术产业。加快实施集成电路、基因工程药物、中药现代化、新型绿色储能电池、智能化制造装备与系统、海水淡化及资源综合利用等12个高新技术产业化专项,每年实施10个以上重大高新技术产业化项目。规划建设IT产业基地。
    第三,发展软件产业。戴相龙指出,应以天津软件园、国家软件出口基地和国家"863"软件专业解化器为依托,重点发展以移动通讯终端、汽车电子为主的高端嵌入式软件,以RFID为核心的应用软件。发展以业务流程外包(BPO)、现代物流和城市信息化为重点的信息服务和系统集成服务。扩大软件外包出口。2010年软件产业占电子信息产业的比重由5%提高到10%,成为我国重要的软件生产、研发和出口基地。





  











Tianjin will focus on developing application software of RFID as the core









        According to XinHua News Agency reports, TianJin Mayor Xianglong Dai in TianJin recently held that the Fourth Session of the 14th NPC, "Eleven Five" period, in order to develop high-tech industries, TianJin will nurture independent brands, promote the industrialization of high and new technology, and develop the software industry etc.  (翻译过了)


        Xianglong Dai said, "Eleven five" period, following the direction of being industrialization, combination concentration, and internationalized, as the core of enhancing the capability of independent innovation, TianJin will speed up technological innovation, nurture independent brand, enhance the division level, and expand the scale of the industry. ( 翻译过了)
        First of all, we should nurture independent brands, establish 10 major industrial technology platform such as information security, electric vehicles, cell engineering, modern Chinese medicine, heavy machinery equipment and energetically explore in the key technologies with independent intellectual property rights and core technologies. 9Our making major breakthroughs in fields of integration circuit, intelligent instrumentation or meter and the fields of new energy etc, Our guiding enterprises to import technology, absorb and then innovate in fields of mobile communications, energy saving and environmental protection, a group is formed to fill the gaps in domestic skills. Actively implementing brand strategy, and cultivate 20 well-known brands which have a certain impact at home and overseas, have their own intellectual property rights, form 30 advantageous high-tech enterprises with independent intellectual property rights and gaining the annual sales income of 500 million Yuan or more. (
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        Secondly, we should promote the industrialization of high technology. Xianglong Dai stressed the need to consolidate advantageous high-tech industries such as electronic information, new energy, to develop strategic high-tech industries such as biotechnology, environmental conservation, new materials of Nami, marine technology, and aviation technology etc. Accelerating to implement 12 high-tech industrialization project such as integrated circuits, genetic engineering medicine, Chinese medicine modernization, a new style of green saving energy batteries, intelligent manufacturing equipment and systems, sea water desalination and comprehensive utilization of resources,  the implementation of more than 10 important high-tech industrialization projects per year. Planning to construct the IT industrial base.
        Thirdly, we should develop the software industry. Dai pointed out that we should rely on Tianjin Software Park, national software export bases and national "863" the software with the quality of professional-oriented decode devices, devote to  develop high-end plug-in software which are most parts in mobile communications terminals, automotive electronics,  make application software with RFID as the core. Developing information services and system integration services which make Business Process Outsourcing (BPO), modern logistics and urban informationization as focused points. Expanding software-outsourcing exports. 2010 the scale that software for the electronic information industry will be increased from 5% to 10%, and has become a major software production, research and development and export base.




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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-3-27 00:05:00 | 只看该作者
今后希望逐渐稳步提高英文水平,所以期待和大家在此多多交流,也谢谢GMAT斑竹的支持和帮助,再次感谢大家。
板凳
发表于 2006-3-28 17:51:00 | 只看该作者

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