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【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day22

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发表于 2022-10-24 23:03:30 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2022-10-25 13:25:18 | 只看该作者
1.
答案:E
解析:
A.that不能指代整个句子。it指代不明。
B.过去进行时的时态错。
C.it指代不明。
D.过去进行时的时态错。

2.
答案:B
解析:
A.用like表举例,错误。such...like搭配错误。
C.用like表举例,错误。少谓语,句子结构不完整,错误。
D.which修饰歧义,就近修饰了hurricanes。少谓语,句子结构不完整,错误。
E.用like表举例,错误。such...like搭配错误。

3.
答案:E
解析:
A.it冗余,导致and前后不平行,错误。
B.granting变为了伴随形式,语义改变,错误。三个动词并列缺少and连接。
C.it冗余,导致and前后不平行,错误。
D.and前后的动词形式不平行。

4.
答案:E
解析:
A.merger指合并、兼并,所以只有一个company是不合理的,会被认为是一家公司。with前面少逗号,导致句子逻辑改变,错误。
B.主语是the merger,主谓不一致。
C.主语是the merger,主谓不一致。
D.主语是the merger,主谓不一致。主动语态错误,the merger不能发出动作。

5.
答案:D
解析:
A.which就近修饰,歧义。
B.it指代不明。which就近修饰,歧义。
C.they指代不明。that单独使用,错误。
E.it指代不明。比较对象不对等(?)。

6.
答案:E
解析:
A.逻辑主语错误。
B.it指代不明。
C.逻辑主语错误。
D.逻辑主语错误。时态错误。

7.
答案:B
解析:
A.which修饰歧义,错误。
B.同位语结构,优选。
C.and前后动词形式不平行,错误。
D.allowing作伴随状语修饰的对象有歧义,可以看作是stablizing的伴随状语,也可以看作是主句的伴随状语。
E.which修饰歧义,错误。

8.
答案:A
解析:
B.that应该紧接在convince后面。
C.convince后that不可省。prefer to用法错误,as compared多余。
D.convince后that不可省。prefer to用法错误,as compared多余。
E.主谓不一致。

9.
答案:E
解析:
A.outnumbering修饰歧义。(?)
B.缺少连词。and前后不平行。
C.and前后不平行。that的指代问题(?)。
D.少谓语,错误。
E.which跳跃修饰,因为which不能指代人所以可以跳过Susan Huntington Dickinson修饰前面的letters。

10.
答案:D
解析:
A.which用于指代了整个句子,错误。them指代不明。
B.which用于指代了整个句子,错误。
C.them指代不明。
E.thereby是副词,两句话之间缺少连词连接,错误。
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发表于 2022-10-31 16:07:39 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2022-11-15 13:03:36 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2022-12-9 08:05:25 | 只看该作者
Day22
1.(202)Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.
A.Competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms gradually caused farmers in Pennsylvania to turn to livestock raising, but before that it was predominantly grain-producing.
B.Once predominantly a grain-producing state, competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually was causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.
C.Pennsylvania’s farmers were gradually caused to turn to livestock raising by competition from large western farms in the mid-nineteenth century, but before that it was predominantly a grain-producing state.
D.It was once predominantly grain-producing, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century by large western farms was gradually causing Pennsylvania’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.  
E.Pennsylvania was once a predominantly grain-producing state, but competition in the mid-nineteenth century from large western farms gradually caused the state’s farmers to turn to livestock raising.

E*
A. it指代不明
B. once…state修饰 competition,不对。
C. it指代不明,前面的被动语态很奇怪
D. was causing很奇怪


2.(203)Growing evidence that coastal erosion occurs continuously, not in just such calamitous bursts like hurricanes, has led scientists and planners to urge a stringent new approach to limiting development along the nation's shoreline.
A.coastal erosion occurs continuously, not in just such calamitous bursts like hurricanes, has
B.coastal erosion occurs continuously, not just in calamitous bursts such as hurricanes, has
C.coastal erosion is continuously occurring, not in just calamitous bursts like hurricanes, having
D.there is continuous coastal erosion, not just in calamitous bursts such as hurricanes, which has  
E.there is continuous coastal erosion occurring, not in just such calamitous bursts like hurricanes, has

B*
有such like都不对,排除AE
句子成分不完整,排除CD


3.(204)A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted pedestrians right-of-way.
A.regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted
B.regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, granting
C.regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted
D.regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted   
E.regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted

E*
这个ordinance是用来规范自行车使用的,或者说规范了自行车的使用,感觉ing或者动词都可以。但是根据语法规则,排除A(required前面加and)B(中间至少有个and)C(required前面加and)和D(缺少成分)

4.(205)Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to save money and extend companies’ service areas, the merger of the nation’s leading gas and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening their utility markets to competition.
A.and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening
B.and electric companies are intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
C.and electric companies are intended to create a huge network that will be marketing the utilities in question, with states opening
D.company and electric company are intending to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question, with states opening      
E.company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open

E*
主语the merger,排除BCD
AE之间纠结,E顺眼点。
A的错误:
* "leading gas and electric company" is wrong; if you read this literally (which is the only way that you should ever read it), then it implies rather clearly (and wrongly) that we're talking about one company, which handles both gas and electric.
*”with states opening..." is incorrect. when you have an -ING WITHOUT COMMA modifier, like this one, it's a RESTRICTIVE ("essential") modifier. this means that we're only talking about those states that are "opening their utility markets to competition", the implication being that only some states are doing so. the intended meaning is better conveyed by "as states open..."


5.(206)For the first time in the modern era, non-Hispanic Whites are officially a minority in California, which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago.
A.which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters only a decade ago
B.which amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when it was nearly three-quarters
C.and that amounts to a little less than half the population of the state, down from a decade ago, when they were nearly three-quarters
D.amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from nearly three-quarters a decade ago   
E.amounting to a little less than half the population of the state, down from what it was a decade ago by nearly three-quarters

D*
AB which修饰California,错误。
C run-on,且that指代不明。
DE之中,E的it指代不明,选D。


6.(207)Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
A.Studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
B.By the study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, it was possible for the secrets of how embryos develop to begin to be unraveled by scientists.
C.By studying a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, the fruit fly enabled scientists to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.
D.By studying the fruit fly, a household nuisance and also a time-honored experimental subject, the secrets of how embryos develop are beginning to be unraveled by scientists.     
E.The study of the fruit fly, a household nuisance but a time-honored experimental subject, has enabled scientists to begin to unravel the secrets of how embryos develop.

E*
CD逻辑主语不对。
B奇怪。A使秘密开始被揭露,奇怪;而且studying的发出者是secrets。


7.(208)The yield of natural gas from Norway's Troll gas field is expected to increase annually until the year 2005 and then to stabilize at six billion cubic feet a day, which will allow such an extraction rate at least for 50 years' production.
A.2005 and then to stabilize at six billion cubic feet a day, which will allow such an extraction rate at least for
B.2005 and then to stabilize at six billion cubic feet a day, an extraction rate that will allow at least
C.2005 and then stabilizing at six billion cubic feet a day, with such an extraction rate at the least allowing
D.2005, then stabilizing at six billion cubic feet a day, allowing such an extraction rate for at least   
E.2005, then stabilizing at six billion cubic feet a day, which will allow such an extraction rate for at least

B*
which不可以修饰整个句子,排除AE。
平行,排除CD。选B。


8.(209)Despite the growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will still use travel agents.
A.growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
B.growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would
C.growing number of people purchasing plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
D.fact that the number of people purchasing plane tickets online is growing, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would         
E.fact that the number of people who purchase plane tickets online are growing, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers compared with automatic teller machines, many travelers would

A*
不熟悉despite的用法,但可以排除BCDE,convinced that要放在一起(排除BCD),E应该是is和will。永远不要写of+noun.+doing
despite只能加名词,但是名词可以有修饰。可以放在句首或句中,不可以加that从句。
in spite of用法和despite一样,但despite更正式。
正确的用法:
despite+noun.
despite the fact that…
despite + verb-ing


9.(210)Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
A.Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering
B.Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
C.Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 and outnumbering
D.Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering   
E.Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

A*
which修饰有误,排除DE。平行结构,排除BC。选A。
选E。读的时候也觉得E最好,which可以越位修饰,但是斟酌之后还是给排除了。A的outnumbering是result,但句意来说不是,所以不对。


10.(211)Many entomologists say that campaigns to eradicate the fire ant in the United States have failed because the chemicals that were used were effective only in wiping out the ant's natural enemies, which made it easier for them to spread.
A.which made it easier for them
B.which makes it easier for it
C.thus making it easier for them
D.thus making it easier for the ant        
E.thereby, it was made easier for the ant

D*
which不对,排除AB。E run-on
C them不对。D对。

37#
发表于 2022-12-12 16:30:34 | 只看该作者
D22
1. 习惯搭配:competition from sb./sth 排除AD;BD: cause用过去进行时错误;
2. ACE: 表示举例不能用like;CD无谓语
3. B: regulate与mandate,require并列逻辑意思不合理;三个动词并列,最后一个动词前应该加and;granting 做伴随逻辑意思不合理
4. 划线句子的主语为merger单数,用is!!(排除BCD)E:as states open伴随着各州开放公共事业市场的竞争
5. AB: which无所指,前面没有成分可以与amounts to连接(the numbers of non-Hispanic Whites in California才可以);E:down from what it was a decade ago比较对象不合理, 应该是人口数与人口数比,而不是人口与时间
6. BCD是谁study不清楚;A语意有误解
7. AE which就近修饰the extraction rate逻辑意思不合理;
8. 错选B。just as与many travelers will…并列,所以应该放在that后面;would表示不确定性或,过去时态,两种可能性都不对,所以would用法错
9. A 逻辑上不正确;CD无谓语;B end与begin并列,begin时态不正确;outnumber没有主语
10. AB. which就近修饰enemies错误; C. them指代不清; E. thereby是副词,而且只是插入成分,两句话见没有连词,run-on sentence
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