【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8

wannatechan · 发表于 2022-10-10 21:44:58

Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters（its不能指代all;fragment）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters（its不能指代all;fragment;formed和had done时态不一致）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （its不能指代all）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter（while这里的省略不正确，while必须要和从句或者ing短语连用）
答案：A

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,（known前面要有group）
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group(前半句没有提到group,such无指代)
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （known前面要有group）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group(前半句没有提到group,such无指代)
答案：B

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have
答案：E
①thesis要表达的是完整的一件事情②要清晰说明thesis和Shopping for a Better World的关系

PennyWen95 · 发表于 2022-10-13 17:39:59

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PennyWen95 · 发表于 2022-10-20 23:26:24

【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8

1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.

A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter 正确选项

some that formed结构中some在定语从句中做主语，主动行使form动作错误；all与后面的its 单复形式不统一
with是指与colonies相关的东西，而“some”指的是殖民地本身，所以这句话字面
上说的是“有殖民地的殖民地”；while多余，因为后面的others as religious havens
中没有谓语动词，while必须省(如果有谓语动词则不能省，如Some cleaned the
windows, while others mopped the floor)

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.

B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group

Records of sth. 固定搭配，比records that简洁地道。
A．of their not paying back their loans表达不简洁，第一个their累赘；未划线部分的
known修饰loans不合理
B．correct；本题关键在于识别出逗号后面成分的修饰对象-- borrowers的同位语必须
是a group才合理，。
C．With引导独立主格，其逻辑主语为it（指代company），逻辑不合理；such无所指，
错误且多余。
D．定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道；未划线部分的known修饰loans不合理
E．定语从句在这里表达不简洁地道；E中的“such a group”是错误的，因为句子的开
头没有“group”这个词。

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.

E.whose thesis was simple: consumers have

thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事

鸡麦特焖焖 · 发表于 2022-10-24 10:35:39

Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
答案A
其他没有主句

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
E

ABC 无法很好地说明动作
Esuch a group 同位前面的概念（？不确定

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have
E

A of…无法很好的说明thesis
B同上
C thesis不可能是consumers
D 没必要强调是simple的，with有很多意思不佳

野生小刘 · 发表于 2022-11-4 08:43:46

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CHENOlivia · 发表于 2022-11-30 09:54:04

我的答案：ABE
1.
B 没有主句
C charters和为划线部分的its不一致
Dall 和a charter不一致
Ewith while不对
2.
A 两个their重复
C with such 不对
D that不简洁，没有同位语的名词
E that 不简洁，such 没必要
3.
A of sb doing不对
B of sb doing 不对
C where不对，同时冒号后面用完整句子
D that is a simple one 不简洁

Ranyo · 发表于 2022-12-3 04:41:30

Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter

A*
B的as a commercial venture不对，应该是复数。
C的that不知道哪来的，不对。
DE的with在这里无法解释其意思。E的while使用也不对。while后面必须有动词，无论是while+句子还是while+verbing都可以，但是不可以一个动词成分都没有。选A。

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group

C*?
答案是B。DE的that they不对，they指代了records还是borrowers？指代不明。
这道题在BC之间纠结了一下，选了C，但答案是B。错在没读懂句子意思。

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have

E*
AB的thesis of consumers having the power不对
C的consumers having不对，缺少动词。
D太wordy了。
E的whose修饰shopping for a better world，whose可以修饰非人类。

Fox的Dream · 发表于 2023-1-8 16:15:29

Day8
1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter定语从句
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
后面是its, 排除BCD；while后面应该有从句或动词ing

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have
that is a simple one- wordy
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have
whose可以修饰非人类

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