【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8

黑框旻

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黑框旻

1.A
A：
B：being多余；划线后的its表明是单数，all错误
C：some that formed用了限制性修饰some，感觉不必要，累赘；all 同B
D：being，all 同B
E：with和while并列不当

2.E ❌ B
A：of 后的核心语义在not paying，不如从句
B：同A
C：同A
D：collectively known就近形容loan，语义不成立
E：

3.E
A：of后的核心语义只有consumers，不如从句
B：同A
C：where只能用来修饰具体地点
D：is a simple one累赘
E：

justforstar

1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.C
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter（each是二者）
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters（ some being和as不对应）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter（ some being和as不对应；with不好）      
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter（ each是二者；with不好）

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.B
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,     
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group(“such a group” 是错误的， 因为句子的开头没有“group” 这个词)

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have   
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have

Rickyri

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Rickyri

1.A
2.B
3.E  AB的，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.，而并不是”sb做某事”，结构不好，应该用that引导后面做从句

一只小白

1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter      
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter
A：排BE缺谓语；all& each，后面是its，排CD
2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,     
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
B: of & that，排DE；their多余排A；such无指代，排C
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have   
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have
E：with做伴随错排AD；where错排C；重心错排B

olegg678

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olegg678

a 同位语
e 同位语从句
e 定语从句

在水里睡觉

1. A
2. B  
3. E

T7willG700

1. A
split each/all：未划线部分its，排除BCD
剩下AE
E中while后面无动词 ❌ while后边either跟句子or verbing，不可以不跟verb
Ron用了with排的E，不李姐，很玄学的概念
选A

2. B

3. E
错选ABC的仔细看这篇帖子
https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/as-the-honeybeea-s-stinger-is-heavily-barbed-t7194.html