【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day8

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1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists.
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters （which无所指）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters （注意未划线的代词，代词指代不一；不平行）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter      （being-wordy；all-its 指代不一）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter （with不合适，这里用some, others来说明13 colonies，不应该是伴随，错误）（with-与殖民地相关的东西）

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market（同位语）.
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time,     （that不对？错误）(known修饰loan不对）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group
3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having  （thesis of sb. doing sth.的核心在于sb.而不是sb.做某事）
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have   
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have

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1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists. AE
A.some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
B.some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters （being 出现的很奇怪）
C.some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters（s就不了行了）
D.with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter （同B）
E.with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter （因为后面有个its，前面必须是单数，这里的with存疑，while必须要和从句或者ing短语连用，这里的是名词+介词短语）

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market. B
A.of their not paying back their loans on time,（their doing 是个坏的用法）
B.of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C.of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group （with 不需要）
D.that they do not pay back their loans on time, （后面的插入语不知道修饰谁了）
E.that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group（这里不是举例，而是known as）

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. E
A.with the simple thesis of consumers having（这里的thesis会变成客户的能力）
B.which had the simple thesis of consumers having（同A）
C.where the thesis was simple:  consumers having（where 修饰具体地点）
D.with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have （that 的修饰不如E的简洁）
E.whose thesis was simple:  consumers have

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1.（190）The thirteen original British colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth its form of government and the rights of the colonists. A
A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each had a written charter
some formed as…others as…作同位语；each强调
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all of which had written charters---being多余；all与后面its单复不统一
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, all had written charters---that定从some主动formed错误；all与后面its单复不统一
D. with some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a written charter ---being多余；all与后面its单复不统一；with使得some并不是指代colonies而是colonies相关的东西
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religious havens, each had a written charter—补充：while多余，后面others as religious havens没有谓语动词
While不能用于任何不包含动作形式的结构，与从句/Ving短语连用

2.（191）The loan company announced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of their not paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprime lending market. E B
A. of their not paying back their loans on time, ---第一个their多余，未划线known修饰loan不符语意
B. of not paying back their loans on time, a group-- a group为borrowers的同位语，正确
C. of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group---with独立主格逻辑主语为company错误；such错误
D. that they do not pay back their loans on time, ---定从表达不简洁；未划线known修饰loan不符语意
E. that they do not pay back their loans on time, such a group---定从表达不简洁；such a group错误，前面没group

3.（192）In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy. A E
议会开始印刷Shopping for a Better World（书），书的理论很简单：消费者有能力通过仅仅拒绝购买去改变公司。expedient  adj. 权宜的；方便的；有利的
A. with the simple thesis of consumers having---独立主格修饰错误，此处解释书中理论，用同位语从句或冒号
B. which had the simple thesis of consumers having---which修饰Better World语意错
补充：thesis应该用同位语从句修饰，thesis of sb. doing sth.结构中thesis的核心只是sb.， 而并不是”sb做某事”
C. where the thesis was simple:  consumers having---where修饰具体地点
D. with a thesis that is a simple one:  consumers have--独立主格修饰错误；that定从多余
E. whose thesis was simple:  consumers have

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