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8月30日考的，几天知道的分数，作文是6分。
先提前声明我可不是什么牛人。我用2个模版混合在一起再加以改动让它办成我自己的。个人认为现在考twe不需要准备排比句什么的。但最关键的是一定要保证每写一句话没有语法错误！！！这个非常之关键！在平时练习的时候一定要注意！还有就是一定要争取每一句话都有不同的句式。相信大家语法都很好，那么我们就应该发挥祖上流传下来的光荣传统并且把它发扬光大，把脑子里想的所有句式，从句，结构阿什么的都用上，比如独立主格，这个东东很好用，只要你在第一段比较显眼的地方来一下，判分的人没什么理由给你底分（我是指在你的作文没有语法错误的情况下）。如果你准备了排比句就再好不过了，但我觉得它的效果只是锦上添花而已。 还有模版的问题，大家一定要注意！！！得到的模版一定要自己改一改再用！！千万不能原版照抄！这样得3。5的可能性是很大地！！！
这个是我考试的时候用的模版，大家可以看一看：
Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important for us to take a glance at this problem, which people always bump into the dilemma to consider: This puzzle is the much debated one in that it can affect everybody in their daily lives. The choice, nevertheless, is not easy to make. However, I shall agree that In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my point of view.
In the first place, the most important reason in support of my point is that For example I think there is no better example than this one that can elaberate my view.
In the second place, as far as I am concerned, another chief reason for my view, is that For instance, If you can understand this case, you may see my point more clearly.
In addition, it can also be shown that As a case of point, .
To draw a conclusion, the grounds discussed above, sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive. We may safely arrive at the consequence that Further more, we can definitely be helped to make dicisions in our later lives by debating this topic。
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发表于 2005-9-17 23:32:00
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