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Topic:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

My essay:

There is always an argument in that high schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study or not. In my opinion, I agree with the first one.

Firstly, to study the courses that one wants to study can make him more positive. He may choose the courses that interested him most by making the choices by himself. And then he can concentrate on the courses much better and study harder. In this condition, he can easily get some achievement in the fields he loved.

Secondly, if one was allowed to study all the courses he liked, he could gain more time on his favourite lessons. Let us try to think about this. If Mary Curie had to study hard in finance or economics, could she have enough time to study so hard in physics? Could she be authorised the Nobel Price? If Newton was asked to study Japanese, could he work out so many formulas on physics? Maybe he would still be hit by the fallen apple, but I think he could only try to find out that how to say "apple" in Japanese but not why the apple could fall to the ground.

Some people may point out that if all the students chose the same subjest, then the others would have no specialist for the future. But I'm sure that it will never happen.There are so many students in the world today. It is impossible for them to choose only several subjects. And we can also help them to determine which subject is the most suitable for them. I think in this way we could have the specialists on all kinds of subjests.

From the reasons I listed above, we are able to conclude that high schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Because from this they can study much harder, much better and much more aggressive.（320）

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