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songyang0121

104.

 “The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

“任何国家的价值应该更多根据它的科学和艺术成就来衡量而非根据它的商业成就。”

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freaksugar

我的一点愚见：

中心：赞成The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements

分点：1. Value of a nation is not measured by monetary item. blahblah

            2. Value of a nation should consist the measurement of many factors: achievements in each field can count. eg: GDP of a nation consist: consumer spending, goverment spending (budgeting), net of exports/imports blahblah...

           3. Business successes might be a factor contributing to other achievement such as providing funding for other field blahblah..or you can counter that with the noble prize rewardes ppl who have significant achievement with money and honor blahblah..

结尾：business successes should not be the only measurement for the value of a nation, other factors should be considered...scientific and artistic achievements blahblah..

songyang0121

谢谢！ 呵呵 从小就怕写作文