第一次发作文，求狠拍

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小弟准备托福也算有段日子了，但是作文一直都没敢动手写，临近考试，觉得不练不行了，请大家多多帮忙。


今天第一次发作文出来，由于个英语人基础比较差，其中的语法错误以及各种其他错误一定很多，如果各位大神能够帮忙指出，我感激不敬！！


Has the ease of cooking improved life?




Prepared food is the more and more commongoods in the market. It is truly that food plays an essential role in our dailylife, therefore this sort of ease-food is popular with housewives andbusy-employees. The major advantages of it is time-saving and convenient. Ittruly helps to improve our life quality for the following illustrate.


Using prepared food which bought fromsupermarket can save food-preparing time to enjoy the process of cooking. It isa noncontroversial viewpoint, reinforced by the instance of my mother. The timewhich she make a full-time cooking with the common food material should betaken about half an hour, while it was a quarter to cook the preparedmaterials. As my mother said, "I'm so glad to pay less attention onpreparing food, but on how to cook more well. Cooking become the most enjoyablething to me in whole day." It is obvious that the ease of cooking make allof my family happy and even we can get more delicious food daily.


Moreover, Using prepared food is morehealth for us. In the ever-developing society, people need take more effect ontheir job for survival, and even ignore their diet quality in workdays, as aresult, ease of cooking satisfy their demands. Take a business man for anexample. Toward a people who spent about at least 14 hours on their business,it is impossible to enjoy in his half-an-hour-dinner. Without the ease ofcooking, they would eaten little nutritional food which only provide negativeeffective on their body. Hence, as we discussed above, the ease of cooking is trulyhelpful for our life.


Last but not the least, using prepared foodmake cooking funny. It is an accepted fact that cooking is a pleasure activityto someone who cooks in pursuit of catching families’ or friends’ smell whenthey eat one’s food. However, toward someone who love cooking but have tenthumbs, it is too hard to prepare food materials, picking, washing and cutting,they may make it worse and worse. So the prepared food is a completely solutionto them. With it, those people could intoxicate themselves intocooking-pleasure.


In sum, while it is truly that theprepared-food which is a new goods in the market reveal some disadvantages asother new thins before, it brings more merit to us. With the development ofthis sort of goods, the ease of cooking will totally change our life.