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高人们 帮我看看我这个作文几分吧 看我还用考吗

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楼主
发表于 2004-4-28 04:51:00 | 只看该作者

高人们 帮我看看我这个作文几分吧 看我还用考吗

题目是 你做什么去保持健康?   今天 27 好考的  分数试  22   12--28  22  最高240  你们说我还用在烤一次吗 这分数 有学校上吗  u of t 怎么样? 我报的不是主校区    看看我的作文能几分呀  和我考试写的基本上一样  谢谢了  谢谢了   各位



Upon to this question, that how to do can stay healthy, people will provide different responses, but as far as I am concerned, I convince that the following article will answer this question, and I will elobrate them bellow.


That individuals should carry out games and sports to keep healthy is the first head and chief reason that I chosen to put here. On the one hand, games enable people to aviod the medical preblem and enjoy a good physical condetion. On the another hand, the psychology pressure can be reduced to the minimum by frequently taking pratice. Both of those vividly Indecate that game is beneficial to human.


Another reason of my views is that people should live in the nice environment. In contrast to the poor setting, in witch people usually suffer from various diseases due to the pollution, the nice natural condition enable citizen to enjoy the clear air and water, thus making the people keep healty. Obviously, it is a disrable choice to live in the wenderful surrounding.


Finally, the imconparable reason is that the food is conducive to the health. This can be improved by numerous facts. For instance, thank to eating the green food, my uncle is very health and rarely get illness. Undoubtedly, the diet is significant to human and we need take a great care to the food.


That it is must be explained that these three reasons sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any one of them. Therefore, I commend that practice, good surrounding, and diet is conducive to health of human. Then I wish every people could keep health.


沙发
发表于 2004-4-28 05:05:00 | 只看该作者

不太乐观,我估计4分左右,主要是理由不够充分,我认为ETS主要看你的理由段,什么5段结构,3段结构占的比重都不大,事实上的是,我上次考试的作文写了5段,我同学只写了3段,她根本就不知道什么是模版的人,她得了5分,我却,哎!!!郁闷,所以理由段能多写就多,能举例就举管它是不是很恰当呢.

板凳
发表于 2004-4-28 05:08:00 | 只看该作者

6分!

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2004-4-28 05:16:00 | 只看该作者
对了 各位  我这个是机写的      谢谢了      哎  不想学了呀
5#
发表于 2004-4-28 06:20:00 | 只看该作者
收到分数时会比你想像中的好~~
6#
发表于 2004-4-28 07:10:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Cotta在2004-4-28 5:08:00的发言:

6分!


强烈赞成!!!

7#
发表于 2004-4-29 08:22:00 | 只看该作者
5分有希望!!!
8#
发表于 2004-4-29 11:24:00 | 只看该作者
你运气够好。。作文到4分就可以去ubc了
9#
发表于 2004-4-29 12:40:00 | 只看该作者
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10#
发表于 2004-4-30 11:31:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用Cotta在2004-4-29 12:40:00的发言:
相信我,3分你就可以上哈佛了..

哈哈,你怎么这么好玩啊!!!

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