5.17就要上考场了。。各位高手帮忙看下偶第作文吧。。。

zhang03154

What does success come from, taking risks or careful planning?

In my opinion, success are determined by careful planning .Although there is always a quarrel in this question, some people thought that many people get success with a risky try and others didn’t think so. By taking risks, you can get what you want in a second, and sometimes with just a little pay. Most people maybe will think it’s pleasant. But as how you get success, you will lose it in the same ways, because you don’t know how to keep it. You are always trying. Once you are fortunate, you will get success. But the luck will not always stand by you. So you need to have a good plan, and you should do something practically.

Recently, a famous teleplay called ‘prison break’ was hot. Almost everybody along with me talked about it. The story of Michael Scofield in it is just expressing this truth. He wants to rescue his brother, Lincoln. Does he take a risk? If he does, he may probably fail I think. He made a very meticulous plan, including all the things which will be used when they escape from the jail, such as the vehicle, the plane, the map of the prison, and so on. He gets success at last due to his plan. The careful plan effectively avoided the possibility of failure.

There is an old saying that the chance will never favor the unprepared people. If you want to get success, you have to get prepared. Making a careful planning is the first condition. The more careful you have planned, the closer you will get the aim. So you can get confidence in your work. No matter what happened, will just have a small impact on your. You can do it as your plan.

XUN ZI has said that a one-kilometer journey began with a foot. Without a careful plan, we will always work worriedly. We will worry about everything may happened. As soon as a tiny change in our work, we will spend a lot of energy. So doing something practically is vital. We can’t control the destiny. All we can do is getting prepared for it. Nowadays, the competition has been more and more drastic. Once you can’t catch others, you will be defeat. Careful planning helps you face different situation in the society, not only with you work but also with you life.

最好给个打分吧。 这篇文章我写了大概50分钟，不怎么顺。应该问题有很多，大家给点建议最好。谢谢谢谢

zandds

In the long run, there is always an argument about whether success comes from taking risks or careful plans. Some people think that risky try leads a success. They argue by taking risks, you can get what you want in a second, and sometimes with just a little pay, which is a pleasant thing. Others, however, hold a contrary opinion. Definitely, I support the latter viewpoint.

  People always expect to obtain a lot but would not pay for that diligently. But when you get success in this way, you will lose it in the same way. Because you don’t know how to keep it. You are always risking. As you are fortunate , you may get success. But luck will not always stand by you. Thus, you need to have a good plan, and you should do something practically.

我想第一段这么改一下 should be better

[此贴子已经被作者于2008-5-11 23:58:52编辑过]