请教各位大侠了

john2006

第一次考托分数都不好意思说，但我还是要积极面对：74分，阅读22，听力20，口语17。作文15，有一种绝望的感觉，我不知道该怎么办了，开学前8周我逃了很多课来看托福，结果却很失望，大家能给我口语和作文方面的建议吗，我万分感谢，这是ETS给的口语和作文的评价

Speaking about familiar topics	Fair(2.5 - 3.0)	Your responses indicate you are able to speak in English about your personal experiences and opinions in a mostly clear and coherent manner. Your speech is mostly clear with only occasional errors. Grammar and vocabulary are somewhat limited and include some errors. At times, the limitations prevent you from elaborating fully on your ideas, but they do not seriously interfere with overall communication.
Speaking about campus situations	Limited(1.5 - 2.0)	Your responses indicate that you have some difficulty speaking in English about information from conversations, newspaper articles, university publications, and so on. While you are able to talk about some of the key information from these sources, limited grammar and vocabulary may prevent you from fully expressing your ideas. Problems with pronunciation make it difficult for listeners to understand you at times.
Speaking about academic course content	Limited(1.5 - 2.0)	In your responses, you are able to use English to talk about the basic ideas from academic reading or lecture materials, but, in general, you include few relevant or accurate details. It is sometimes difficult for listeners to understand your responses because of problems with grammar, vocabulary, and pronunciation. Overall, you are able to respond in a general way to the questions, but the amount of information in your responses is limited and the expression of ideas is often vague and unclear.
Writing  Skills	Level	Your Performance
Writing based on reading and listening	Limited(1.0 - 2.0)	Your response was judged as limited due to failure to understand the lecture or reading passage; deficiencies in relating the lecture to the reading passage; and/or many grammatical errors and/or very unclear expressions and sentence structures.
Writing based on knowledge and experience	Fair(2.5 - 3.5)	You expressed ideas with reasons, examples, and details, but your response indicated weaknesses such as you may not provide enough specific support and development for your main points; your ideas may be difficult to follow because of how you organize your essay or because of the language you use to connect your ideas; and/or grammatical mistakes or vague/incorrect uses of words may make the writing difficult to understand.

最后我想说的是我用了作文模版，但是感觉效果不好，字数到是提上来了，我都不知道以后还该不该用了

parfour

兄弟，作文拿多点分啊

john2006

我也很想啊，手上还有一本李笑来托福高分作文，背了一个暑假，老忘，唉

parfour

把那本书丢一边去吧．你背那上面的东西写不出好文章，还不如多背新概念４