作文一篇，真诚求拍砖

Nenluky

最近作文越写越烂，越改越不满意。贴上一篇规定时间内写的简直无脸见人的作文，求大家告诉我问题在哪里呀。自己真的写的好痛苦。
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than by doing physical exercise.

 With fast development of global economy, an increasing number of competitions challenges people in the modern society. People who want to relax themselves in order to keep health can choose many kinds of methods. Doing physical exercise in the gym is a choice, however, I believe that watching a movie or reading a book is a better way to relax. To illustrate my point of view, I  listed several reasons as follow.
 To begin with, a major concern of people who want to relax themselves is relax their spirits. Watching a movie can lead them to a world, in which there is no annoyed. I will give my own experience as an example, when I knew that my exam cannot pass, I felt so disappointed, and then I went to watch a movie named Gone with the wind, what makes an impression on me is the words:"Tomorrow is another day". Therefore I gain the coverage and confidence to confront my things. A movie or a book is not only a style of entertainment, but also a way to relax our spirit. Moreover, It can let us to restore our fighting will.
 Reading a book or watching a movie take advantages on relax mood, while for change mind and gain knowledge, those also for the best.
 Furthermore, reading a book can change our mind to another aspect so that we can forget the pressure and gain knowledge of another area. For instance, people who work on math feel so annoyed, read a book about literature may reduce the pressure, and also can learn from the book. Forget our major, do something else. However, surprising, we find a unprecedented wonderful world. The different feeling will swallow our bad humor, and then we become more vigorous and powerful.
 In addition, people who want to relax indicated that they need take a break efficiently. The most convenience and money-saving way is read a book or watch a movie. Choose a fine day and sit in sofa at home, we can read a book or watch a movie all the time if we like. Thinking it, don not care about others and do ourselves at home. How wonderful method we relax ourselves. The way we relax can save money and time, obviously, is a good idea.
 Indeed, take physical exercise can give us direct experiences. It can make our bodies strong, and also keep us health. However, It needs a long time to persist, and may let people tired more than before. Thus I will not walk away from reading a book or watching a movie.

 All in all, for the reasons I listed above, we can safely conclude that reading a book or watching a movie is a better way than taking physical exercise to relax.

真诚求拍砖，各位大牛走过路过看一眼啊，我觉得自己死都不知道死在哪里

Nenluky

求回复啊。写了擦，擦了写

Nenluky

太感谢了啊，我写作文常常词穷的。谢谢你