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11.7 独立写作,求拍砖,谢谢亲们~

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发表于 2012-11-7 19:02:51 | 显示全部楼层 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way of a person’s dress is an indication of his or her personality or character.





It is a truth universally acknowledged that we are used to cover themselves with clothes since we evolved from apes. There is a heated topic that whether our dresses can reveal our personalities or characters. From my perspective, it’s hard to say that our dresses can be an indication of our nature. My opinion can be supported by several reasons as following.



As we know, people in different cultural background always have different preferences about dress, we cannot know about a person only by his/her clothes, so it is unwarranted to state that one person’s dress is the reflection of his/her character. Nowadays, advances in media technology have great impact on the way people’s views about dress and fashion. Maybe it is the media hype that influence people’s dress style rather than their own personalities do. For example, in 2005, Super Girl was popular, and almost everyone watched such TV show. Because of its popularity, many young people started to follow their idol by wearing the identical style dress. Since then, hundreds of thousands of ladies in Chinese loved to dress themselves like a handsome boy or worn big black glasses. We can see how the fashion show changes people’s personal aesthetic view. Therefore, people’s dresses are not just out of their nature, outside elements sometimes have more important influence.



In addition, one person’s position also brings uncorrected evaluation about one’s personality or character. People in different level positions always have their particular styles. That’s why you can distinguish a boss from his/her employees quickly. But they will not just limit their roles in one position. Maybe in their daily life, they are not serious as they are in the highly position. If we evaluate their personalities hastily, maybe we will get a false result.



Different occasions may determine one’s dress as well in stead of one person’s own preference. Taking various parties as examples, in a formal raising fund party, man should wear tie and suit, woman should wear formal dress. However, in a family party or festival party, people can wear whatever they want, because such an occasion is informal and for fun. From this point, we may understand that people’s dresses are not necessarily the true indication of people’s own characters.



In such a society with multiple characteristics, we should know a person from a variety of aspects. Dress is no longer the pure factor for us to evaluate one’s personality and character. Only when we get more information about one person can we get a correct answer.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-8 19:03:44 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢rose,thanks, 一起加油.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-8 21:56:29 | 显示全部楼层

11.7作业

11.7 独立

College or University should have a better job preparation for students before they find jobs





As we know, nowadays our country has changed dramatically from citizen’s daily life to the development of our technology. All these changes also lead to a more competitive labor market. People need to equip themselves with more abundant preparations to obtain an edge. So, from my perspective, college or university should have a better job preparation for students before they get jobs.


More preparations can horn students’ qualities and help them get satisfied jobs. Now, many universities have started to provide a large number of various useful sources to students, such as vocation-oriented training and professional speeches about strategies of finding a job. Such practical knowledge is very important for students in the future real-world work environment. Only when students have acquainted with these problems and acquire some indirect experiences from senior professors can they perform better in their fields. As a result, it will be an undeniable fact that students can find jobs easily.


More preparations also can help a college or university gain good reputation, then school can enroll more excellent students next year, therefore college should have a better job-centered education for students. I believe that everybody wants to attend an institute with higher reputation. People always try to improve themselves from different aspects in order to obtain an admission of a good university. If a college can attract hundreds of thousands of students from different places by good reputation, then it will have more excellent alumnus, so maybe these people will donate more money to help the college development in the near future. This is a virtue recycle. From this point, a better jib preparation is a bonus for both students and school.


Taking these reasons as I mentioned above into consideration. No matter a preparation from the short-term factor for students’ career or from the long-term factor for a college’s future bloom. We may safely state that job education is necessary for students, and an institution should provide such a curriculum for students to train them. When all students find their pleased positions and work hard, our society will have a more tremendous change and people will have better life.
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-8 21:57:22 | 显示全部楼层
11.7 作业TPO23 综合


The speaker distracted these three hypotheses in the reading passage about why yellow cedar has been declining for a long time. He pointed out the inaccuracies in each of explanation as following.


Regarding the first cause, the lecture said that it was impossible for beetle to lead to the decline of yellow cedar. Because the health trees could resist the insect parasites by themselves. In addition, the bark of the tree was poisonous, so if the beetle ate the outer layer of yellow cedar, they would die. Therefore, such a cause from beetle or insect parasites was fairly unwarranted.


The professor in the listening material also argued against the reason brown bears were responsible for the decline. He demonstrated that many yellow cedars grew in the island of North America
. There weren't any bears in that island. So the cause from brown bears was highly doubt.

What's more, the speaker rejected the third hypothesis that gradual changes of climate should blame. He explained that many tree also died in the lower elevation areas where was warmer. Generally speaking, the climate in the high elevation was colder and low elevation was warmer. So the frost would only bring damages to trees in higher level rather than in a lower level. Many yellow cedars grew in low elevation, therefore the frozen climate would not kill the trees.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-10 18:48:19 | 显示全部楼层
11.9 独立  spending money on travel &vacation vs. saving for future

Many people are familiar with the film Titanic, there is a scene that when the ship was sloping and sinking, a fat woman was regretting that she hadn’t eaten up the chocolate cake on the table in that morning because of worrying about high calorie would make her shape worse. Actually myriad facets tell us that an acknowledged adage “life is short, please seize the day”. So, I consider that spending money on travel is more essential for us to enjoy the short and beautiful life than saving capitals for future.

For one thing, travel itself can benefit us a lot, such as broadening our horizons and relieving our mental pressures. These advantages are huge bonus for a colorful life because in today’s fierce competitive labor markets, versatile characteristics are extremely important for our future success. Better yet, vacation can help us obtain such qualities and acquire extra experiences to horn our skills. Therefore saving money we just get a record of bank account but nothing.

For another thing, spending cashes on holiday can boost a country’s economy. I believe this is also the reason why many banks have introduced credit cards for citizens. If everyone only saves their salary into a bank or other places, people are not willing to spend them, how does our cash flow in the whole world? How does our economy prosper with frozen capitals? When people are taking their trips, they will spend money on souvenirs, board and lodging and transportation, this series of consumption can bring profits to local residents and improve their material life .From this point, I tend to believe that spending money on travel is a crucial and indispensable for the development of local tourism and the economy of our country.

Finally, vacation is the keystone for people to communicate, especially for international cultures to blend. Such a significant activity, we should try our best to uphold and delicate to it. For instance, every year, there will be hundreds of thousands of foreign friends come to China, they want to experience the special and long Chinese culture. Only when they truly enjoy such an interacted cultural journey can they spread our characteristic traditions to the whole world. Then more people will know about China and come to our lands.

Facing these convincing reasons above, we may admittedly state that spending money is better than saving it because taking a trip can contribute to not only individuals but also our society. Such multiple advantages are enough to push us go to other places and have a good time. So, why not have a journey and feast your limited life soon?
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-10 18:49:04 | 显示全部楼层
TPO25 综合作文
The lecture and the reading passage held opposite opinions toward whether the ancient vessels that found in Iraq could prove ancient people use electric batteries. However, the professor illustrated that the equipment was applied as ancient electric batteries.

The reading mentioned that if such vessels were used as batteries, there would be some metal wires near the vessels. The speaker contradicted this point by saying that these devices were found by local residents not archaeologist, maybe inhabitants had used the original equipment but the archaeologist overlooked.

In addition, regarding the second argument the reading materials claimed, that the copper cylinders inside the jars looked like those copper tools in Seleucia and had the same use, was also rejected by the lecturer. He demonstrated that no evidence was provided that the shape of original scrolls, the same shape was not necessary for the identical purpose. What’s more, when copper was mixed with iron, they usually produced electricity. The original copper used for one purpose, while adapted copper for another purpose. Therefore, we can see how groundless the reading’s reason.

Finally, the professor rebutted the statement that the reading clarified, he explained that small electricity could produce wild short when we touch it. That’s why many ancient people said they had magic power when using batteries. Because modern doctors use electricity to heal legs and pains and stimulate muscles, maybe ancient doctors also use it for the same purpose.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-12 19:22:11 | 显示全部楼层
11.11号独立  It is more important to choose friends that have fun with than to choose friends that will help you when you need them. Please use specific details and examples to support your opinion.

There is a well known story about three visits to thatch. When Liubei was suffering from the military problems, Zhuge liang helped him in emergency and insisted him in establishing Shu. Like Liubei in this story, I prefer to choose a friend that can give me a hand when I’m in troubles.

Admittedly, having fun with others is a significant goal for pursuing in our limited life. We can forget about a variety of bothers and unpleasant things. Of course, we will be happier in such a relaxed situation and keep a good mood for a while. But having a companion who only have fun with you is enough? Will your friendship last for a long time? I may don’t think so. If your partner often finds lots of excuses to reject help you, what will you think? You must be angry and disappointed. Therefore, this fun-centered relationship is not a wise choice for selecting a friend.

As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Timely help from a company is really important to enhance friendships. I believe that we always hope our friends do us a favor rather than turning around and walking away, because we know that time-tested friendship is more essential for us to cherish. For example, Bill Gates and Paul, even thought the latter is not famous and successful as the former, Paul gives Bill huge supports on the development of software. They face those depressing days together and deal with myriad technological problems day and night. Their pure friendship teaches us a lot about what thing is most crucial to people’s relationship.

Friend who can share joys and sorrows can benefit not only individuals but also the solidity of our whole society. When people get well along with each other and always help the counterparts, our society will be full of love and become more harmonious, as a result, the whole group will make progresses. For instance, Chenguang Biao, a famous philanthropist in China. He is the very person who often gives a timely hand to his friends. To him, all people in China are his friends, and he is willing to offer aids to individuals who are in troubles. While Sichuan was suffering the big earthquake in 2008, he donated numerous necessary equipments and provided emergent funds to save those dying lives. On one hand, he helped them out of the tough situations. On the other hand, he also made a great positive influence to hundreds of thousands of people in China. From this point, we can see misery-tested friends are extremely vital to our society.

Taking all these reasons as I mentioned above, we know that the friend who only shares happy moments is not enough to solid our pure friendships, we need a person who can help us in the hour of needs. Then we can obtain an enduring relationship with him or her.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-13 18:25:03 | 显示全部楼层
TPO24 综合

The reading passage and the lecture held different perspective toward the study of dinosaur's blood tissues. The lecturer pointed out several reasons to contradict the arguments in the reading.

Regarding the first claim in the passage, that small branching channels inside the leg bone could be the presence of blood vessels, was rejected by the speaker. He illustrated that this was not necessarily the case because such substance was like something else. In fact, when the animal died, bacterial would eat the hollow and live inside the bone. Then the bacteria would leave some substance inside the bone. So, the evidence provided by the passage is inadequent to prove the argument.

In addition, the professor also doubted the statement in the reading materials that the presence of spheres could be the remains of red blood cells. He said that the location where the fossils were found appeared some other animals which hadn't blood vessels, including primary dinosaur. So it may be other animal's organic substance was left there rather than T.rex.

Finally, the reading demonstrated that collagen was exactly an association with bone tissue. But the lecturer thrown cast on this point. He explained that researchers had never found a collagen was older than the one before. Scientists didn't know whether the dinosaur's tissue would last for so longer. Concerning such reason, it is too problematic. What's more, such collagen may come from the skin of T. rex. Since people's skin have collagen, which perhaps from skins of dinosaur's bone instead of tissue.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-13 18:25:58 | 显示全部楼层
11月12日
独立 Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

During our limited life, there are a lot of decisions we should make from individual to economy and then to the whole society. So, what is a good strategy for us to establish when we face a variety of issues in our daily life? Keeping patience or taking action soon, which one is better? In my view, the later can benefit us a lot in such a fast changing society.

Admittedly, those who are patient can always consider a issue from all kinds of aspects and obtain a more compelling result, but this strategy is suitable for today’s working environment? I don’t think so. Nowadays, people who are working in many industries must keep themselves faster; otherwise they will not gain any edge toward position promotion. Boss will only select decisive and shrewd workers, they believe those people can make more profits for his or her company. Therefore, we can see that keeping patient may be an obstacle on the way of pursuing a future success for one person.

On the other hand, taking action is also the fittest way to make money in the fierce market. We know that the development of our technology has advanced so much. Facing such a tough situation, successful individuals must equip themselves with some necessary qualities, such as decisive thoughts and timely actions. For example, Jiuzhi Tang, which is a famous country-chain pharmaceutical industry, took fast action in 2010 to buy a large amount of raw materials when they noticed the fluctuating price. The purchasers didn’t wait for a month or several months to make a decision. On the contrary, they did timely purchasing and helped the industry obtain the advantages of price and achieve further success quickly. If they were hesitate at that time, maybe we will see another struggling picture about Jiuzhi Tnag.

Taking action merely bring benefit to one person alone? The answer is negative. Rapid reaction sometimes can boost the development of the whole society and improve people’s material life. Taking Shenzhen as an example, several decades ago, it is a small poor fish village. The only way for residents to make a living depended on fishery. In 1978, China had a policy to develop some areas where were in eastern part of China. Then the government in Shenzhen used such a good opportunity to make a huge progress. Now, we have known that taking action at that time was wise and challenging, but it turns out that speedy action was worth.

Taking all these reason as I mentioned above, we should be firmly convinced that taking action is better for us to walk farther in our career than keeping patient. Next time, do not hesitate to wait for an opportunity, you do need to take timely action quickly. Maybe we will see your blossom in the near future.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-13 23:08:41 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢Anthony&正儿八经.
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