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大家帮忙批一下一个高中生的作文吧……~

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发表于 2007-9-21 11:20:00 | 显示全部楼层

大家帮忙批一下一个高中生的作文吧……~

Do you agree or disagree?

It is better to have two or three close friends than to have a large number of casual acquaintances

Every day we have to meet with various kinds of people and it is universally acknowledged

that it is a must-do to build a good relationship with them and in this avenue it is not     

strange that we have a lot of casual acquaintances .As a matter of fact, there is an old

saying goes, "You will be a happy person if you own 8 true friends in your life". Consequently,

from my perspective view, compared with having a lot of casual acquaintances, it is one of the happiest things in the world to have two or three close friends by my side.

 

 

Only true friends, to some extent, are invariably standing in front of us to deal with the

hard tasks with us. I still remember vividly once in high school, for instance, I was

very excited when I knew that I got the chance to compete for the post of the president of the Student Union. However, I was nervous and I did not know how to exactly prepare my speech. At this crucial time it was my close friend, also being the deskmate of mine, who gave me the advice that I could make a list of the work that I had done for the class and the community and she recalled the precious experience together with me as well. It was from this inspiring talk that I got the central point of my later speech. With her sincere help, eventually, I won the election. I was very grateful to my close friend, who helped me in time and encouraged me a great deal. It is not hard to see that true friends are the optimal helpers when we are in dilemma or difficulty.

 

 

In addition, though true friends are hard to get and one might only have a few true friends, they are the people whom we can turn into and share the happiness with. For example, once

in the middle school I got the first place in the sports meeting and I was so jovial that I

told the exciting news to all my friends. It is the other way round that at the graduation time, when I mention this valuable memory again only my best friends remembered and some of my other friends forgot. It is manifest that only true friends are the people who may share the happiness of the growth with you and they will remember every step of your improvement.

 

 

Ultimately, it is not bad to make a lot of casual acquaintances but as far as I am concered,

two or three close friends are the people who can go into the deep of my heart.


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-23 08:45:00 | 显示全部楼层
好像很多地方都不是很成熟……UP
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-23 12:35:00 | 显示全部楼层
是不通顺吗?请LS指点迷津!~
[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-23 12:35:34编辑过]
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-24 11:50:00 | 显示全部楼层
虚心请教……~
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-9-26 09:45:00 | 显示全部楼层
不知如何修改啊……~
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