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kchszy061ban

TPO 5 综合

The reading talks about the use of the Chaco structures,and gives reader three possible theories about it.While,the professor says that none of the arguments in the passage are convinceable.

First,the reading says that the Chaco structures could be used for residential purpose.However,the professor states that,their outside indeed look like some later buildings for residential,but their inside cast serious doubt on this theory.If the Chaco structures are purely residential,there must be enough fire places for residents' daily cooking.But the fact is that even the largest building of this type has only a few fire places,which could only support around ten families.While the building's rooms are large and so many that they can support hundurd of families.So,the Chaco strtuctures cannot be used for residential.

Then, the second theory in the reading is that the Chaco structures were used to store grains maize.On the contrary,the professor argures that,the size of these buildings are plausible for storing food.But the excavation has found not spoiled grain maize or large containers,if the buildings are truely used for storing,why there no these things which are essential indacators for food supply?

In the end,it proposes that these houses were used for ceremony.While,the professor explains that,although the excavations found a huge number of broken pots,they also found other materials-sand,stones,contruction materials,even tools.It seems as trash piles rather than ceremonial center.Furthermore,the pots are more likely to be thrown by the contruction workers after they ate their meals.Thus,the third theory is not sound enough.

包子不包子

TPO 5 综合

The reading talks about the use of the Chaco structures,and gives reader three possible theories about it.While,the professor says that none of the arguments in the passage are convinceable.

First,the reading says that the Chaco structures could be used for residential purpose.However,the professor states that,their outside indeed looks like some later buildings for residential,but their inside casts serious doubt on this theory.If the Chaco structures are purely residential,there must be enough fire places for residents' daily cooking.But the fact is that even the largest building of this type has only a few fire places,which could only support around ten families.While the building's rooms are large and so many that they can support hundurd of families.So,the Chaco strtuctures cannot be used for residential.

Then, the second theory in the reading is that the Chaco structures were used to store grains,such as maize.On the contrary,the professor argures that,the size of these buildings are plausible for storing food.But the excavation has not found not spoiled grain maize or large containers,if the buildings are truely used for storing,why there are no these things which are essential indacators for food supply?

In the end,it proposes that these houses were used for ceremony.While,the professor explains that,although the excavations found a huge number of broken pots,they also found other materials-sand,stones,contruction materials,and even tools.It seems as trash piles rather than ceremonial center.Furthermore,the pots are more likely to be thrown by the contruction workers after they ate their meals.Thus,the third theory is not sound enough.

注意小错误 其他都很好啦

zombiee

6月21日110815NA One of your classmates needs help with some schoolwork. Which solution would you recommend your classmate should do: to ask you for help or to find a professional tutor for help?

When I was in middle shcool a couple years ago,my classmates often called me "bookworm".In fact,books are the most interesting things I have ever seen,+and I love reading books,love soving problems in the practices ect.Also,when I had some schoolwork which I could not deal with it by myself,I usually choosed to ask my teachers for help.At first,my classmates were willing to talk+about the questions we confronted with,but the result was not so satisfying.+Because When we got together,most of the time we could not concentrate on the quesions,and our knowledge was not sufficient enough to work out all the problems,这句太长了没有用连词，连着用逗号，后面也有同样的问题things gone even worse if my classmates did not know the answer,but意思没有转折 they just gave me a wrong solution.Thus,I would recommend my classmates find a professional tutor when they need help for their schoolwork.

Let us talk about one of the disadvantages if we ask our classmates for help.What will you most likely do when you have time with your classmates?这个说法不地道Doing schoolwork? It is so boring!And we have enough time to cope with it tomorrow,now let us play football with the school team,they are training only at this time of the week.Or they would say,"I have learn a new skill about street dance,let me show you,it is really cool".Then most of the time,you just focus on unralated things,instead of paying your attention to solve the problems.While,if you ask a professional tutor,s/he would not give you the chance to talk about other things.You can solve your problem very quickly without disturbance.

Then,another weakpoint to ask your classmates is that you can not solve some really difficult schoolwork.Whether they are primary students,middle school students,or studying in university,their knowledge is limited.Thus,when some quesions in the schoolwork require related knowledge beyond their level,the answer cannot be gained without the help of a professional tutor.As you can see,a professional tutor's help is necessary and at the same time can save your time if you directly ask s/he instead of your classmates who cannot give you all the answers you need.

Things would make you furstrate if your classmates give you the wrong answer.I still rember one solution which my classmate gave when I asked him about a very difficult mathematical question.According to his solution,I could work out it and got the right answer,so,I just did the same process as he told me when we took a test.But,the process of his solution was indeed incorrect and completely based on inverse method.Therefore,my score was very low in that test.If I had the opportunity to opt again,I would definetely choose to ask the professional tutors.Their experiences give them the wisdom to solve the quesion properly.

Of course,some students feel strained when they ask a professinal tutor because of the age difference.Meanwhile,some specific professional tutors will charge you for their service.However,from what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that the disadvantages of asking classmates ar so many and unacceptable,to ask for help from professional tutor is a better choice.

-- by 会员 kchszy061ban (2012/6/21 22:54:47)

总体不错，表述清楚，细节需细化深入，用词更上一个level比较好
如果是限时写出来的，可以自己先修改一下看起来应该更好。

kchszy061ban

6月22日100619 NA If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, OR use the telephone or voice-messaging.

When it comes to the question of how to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others,people' choices diversified. Some people prefer to use telephone of voice-messaging method because of their convenience and instant,while others would like to use e-mail or text messaging to reveal their congitation and preciseness. Generally speaking,upsetting or controversial problems often relate to serious topics,therefore,using e-mail or text messaging is a better choice to deal with this type of problems.

Comapred to speaking,writing gives people more time to do researches,to think deeply and thus can better explain their ideas. When confronting with upsetting or controversial problems,people need more time to cope with it,Writing e-mail or text massaging thus are the proper to solve this type of problems.On the contrary,using telephone or voice-messaging would cause more questions because of misunderstandings. Once our teachers gave us an assignments for us to talk after class,the topic was whether money and power are the symbol of success.And we began immediately when the class was over.However,none of us could make others to admit that they were wirte becasue the topic was so controversial.And we did not have enough time to think about it. Then,our teacher told us to write about the same topic,and arrange the articles next week.Things became so much better next week when we brought our writtings to the classroom and read them.Thus,when confronting with some problematic questions,it would be better to use writting such as e-mail or text messaging to express you ideas.

Then,e-mail or text messaging can avoid some disadvantages that rised from telephone or voice messaging.People tend to behave more emotional when they use telephone or voice messaging than writting. Their daily communicatin with others is speaking,so they adapted to this type of way to express their thinking and emotions.When using audio methods to express themselves,they will inevitablely band their emotions in their expression. When peope write something,they are more fair and cool-headed. So,when discussing upsetting or controversial problems,writting is a way to avoid personal prejudice in some degree.

Writting is also easy to arrange after the discussion end. The process of discussion is important,as well as the conlusion of it. Ever from the character has been created,huamn began to use them to rember things,to show their thought,and to communicate wiht others.Most of the materials used in modern classes ralate to writting,so,people are familiar paper based materials and have many ways to process the information of them.Furthermore,writting is explicit and abstract,therefore,it is easy to organize.

Of course,speaking is simultaneous and people can use them whenever they have some good ideas about the problems.However,from what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that the benefits of e-mail or text messaging are so many,so,using writting is a thoughtful choice.

kchszy061ban

TPO6 综合
The lecturer talks about the incorrect theories of on-line encyclopedias made in the reading.She says that on-line encyclopedias does have many advantages and methods to treat the problems it confront.

First,the professor points out that errors exsist both in on-line and traditional encyclopedias,none of them could be perfect.While the advantage of on-line encycolpedias is that it can be corrected more easily compared to traditonal one.The mistakes in traditional encyclopedias may last for hundreds of years without change.This is the first advantage of on-line encyclopedias.

Second,many methods can be used to protect the information in on-line encyclopedias.The crucial parts of it can only be read,then,the hackers or vandals can not change it.Moreover,there are special editors who monitor any changes of it,so,some unnecessary changes can be avoid,then,the information of it can be protected.This directly contradicts what the passage states.

Third,the space of on-line encyclopedias is unlimited,thus it can include verious sources from a great range of subjects.While the space of the traditional encyclopedias is not enough to contain every aspects they need to make the information accurate and complete.However,the on-line encyclopedias have  the benefits to have adequate space to include audio,visional,and other types of information.As you can see,the advantage of on-line encyclopedias is so obvious.

kchszy061ban

TPO7 综合
In the reading,the author says that the companies in the United States would not pay much attention to wood certifications. While,the professor in the lectue points out several reasons that they are most likely to adopt this practices in the end.

First,the professor talks about the consumers in the United States do pay attention to the advertisments,and they usually distingish the companies and the indenpended agency when they wacch TV. And,they are willing to trust the indepedended agency with international reputation.This is directly contradicts what is said in the reading.

Second,the price difference between these two products is less than 5%. Consumers in the states will consider the prices only when the difference is so big,in this situation,they would more like to choose the ecocertfied ones in order to protect the enviorment and to enjoy a high quality. So,the price is not a problem relates to the companies to earn ecocertification.

Third,the companies would complete interest in this practise not because of the comsumers in the states,but arise from the competeness of the foreign companies. If the companies in the states do not have this ecocertification as foreign companies,they certainly will loose advantage in the home market. Then,foreign companies will corowd into the states.So,even the products are not used to sale abroad,the companies in the states still forced to get the ecocertification in order to compete with foreign counterparts.

DanielleZ

6.22 修改完了，这篇里面拼写的小错误很多，可能是因为限制时间的原因吧。
也学了不少有用的句子和词，嘿嘿~加油哦~
When it comes to the question of how to discussupsetting or controversial problems with others, people' choices diversified.(我记得之前修改过的一篇banban也是用这句话开头的，很好用的一句话哦~)Some people prefer to use telephone of voice-messagingmethod because of their convenience and instant, while others would like to usee-mail or text messaging to reveal their cogitation and preciseness. Generallyspeaking, upsetting or controversial problems often relate to serious topics, therefore,using e-mail or text messaging is a better choice to deal with this type ofproblems.

Comapred to（with） speaking, writing gives people more time to doresearches, to think deeply and thus can better explain their ideas. Whenconfronting with upsetting or controversial problems, people need more time to cope with it, writinge-mail or text massaging thus are the proper to solve this type of problems. Onthe contrary, using telephone or voice-messaging would cause more questionsbecause of misunderstandings(用的很好，因为我写的时候完全不记得这个词了). Once our teachers gave us an assignments for us (重复)to talk about(talk后面要加介词) after class, the topic was whether money andpower are the symbol of success. And we began immediately when the class wasover. However, none of us could make (persuade可以替换) others to admit that they werewirte(the standpoints that they held by just talking with them，感觉想表达的是这个意思，但是banban写的时候不是很清楚，我尝试提供了一个另外的写法)becasue the topic was so controversial. And we did not have enough time tothink about it. Then, our teacher told us to write about the same topic, andarrange the articles next week. Things became so much better nextweek when we brought our writings to the classroom and read them. Thus, whenconfronting with some problematic questions, it would be better to use writingsuch as e-mail or text messaging to express you ideas.

Then, e-mail or text messaging can avoid somedisadvantages that raised from telephone or voice messaging. People tend to behavemore emotional when they use telephone or voice messaging than writing. Theirdaily communication with others is speaking, so they adapted(adapt) to this type of way to express their thinking andemotions. When using audio methods to express themselves, they will inevitablyband their emotions in their expression. When people write something, they aremore fair and cool-headed. So, when discussing upsetting or controversialproblems, writing is a way to avoid personal prejudice in some degree.

Writing is also easy to arrange after thediscussion ending. The process of discussion is important, aswell as the conclusion of it. Ever from the character has been created, humanbegan to use them to remember things, to show their thought, and to communicatewith others. Most of the materials used in modern classes ralate towritting, so people are familiar with paperbased materials and have many ways to process the information of them. Furthermore,writtingis explicit and abstract(抽象的？banban是想说简洁的意思么？concise可以), therefore, it is easy to organize.

Of course, speaking is simultaneous and people can use themwhenever they have some good ideas about the problems. However, from what hasbeen discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the benefits ofe-mail or text messaging are so many, so, using writting is a thoughtful choice.

包子不包子

TPO6 综合
The lecturer talks about the incorrect theories of on-line encyclopedias made in the reading.She says that on-line encyclopedias does have many advantages and methods to treat the problems it confronts.

First,the professor points out that errors exsist both in on-line and traditional encyclopedias,none of them could be perfect.While the advantage of on-line encycolpedias is that it can be corrected more easily compared to traditonal one.The mistakes in traditional encyclopedias may last for hundreds of years without change.This is the first advantage of on-line encyclopedias.

Second,many methods can be used to protect the information in on-line encyclopedias.The crucial parts of it can only be read,read only format 用一下出现在听力里的词组吧then,the hackers or vandals can not change it.Moreover,there are special editors who monitor any changes of it,so,some unnecessary changes can be avoid to eliminate unbelievable changes没有听到啊,then,the information of it can be protected.This directly contradicts what the passage states.

Third,the space of on-line encyclopedias is unlimited,thus it can include verious sources from a great range of subjects.While the space of the traditional encyclopedias is not enough to contain every aspects they指代的是谁啊need to make the information accurate and complete.对space的讨论 可以吧online traditional 合到一起表述 简洁一些However,the on-line encyclopedias have the benefits to have adequate space to include audio,visional,and other types of information.As you can see,the advantage of on-line encyclopedias is so obvious. 有些信息没听到 reflect the interests of users

逻辑是很清楚的 个别句子可以简练些 但是听力有些没有听到啊 加强练习哦

kchszy061ban

6月23日101030NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the past.

Society keeps changing and so are the capacities requierd to achieve education.The development of human being and technology give modern people so many advantages to get educated than in the past. Computors and Internet make the communication around the world easier and more rapid. With the help of them,people have the ability to know what happened in the world immediately,at the same time they can exchange their ideas about these events to improve knowledge even can correct their wrong opinions on some events.Therefore,it is no doubt that people are now easier to become educated than in the past.

Considering the advent of communication technology,people nowadays are easier to get information from various ways to become educated.You only need to click on one button of your computors or cell phones when you have some problems or want to know about some specific knowledge.The information on-line provided is up-to-date,easy to access,and widely available to the public. While,hundreds of years ago,these technologies were quite unimaginable. Thus,the technologies give modern people the advantage to achieve information more convenient and complete.

Educatin nowadays becomes more focus on international exchange and informatin sharing,this give modern people the opportunity to choose the subject what they interest in and love to continue on throughout their life. The present day transportation system is fast and safe,people only need to spend several hours on traveling to every part of the world to acheve education. Furthermore,modern education becomes equally focus on demestic and global events,so the citzens now have a much broader vision on the issues beyond the national boundaries than ancient people did.Therefore,modern people have so many ways to get educated,at the same time they have the opportunity to go to the place they can be educated.

The development of human being give all the members of modern society the freedom to achieve equal rights to become educated. Everyone in modern society have the right to get educated,and the goverment is reqired to protect this right,to ensure children can accept the education. While in the past,so many people could not go to school simplely because of their social status or economic condition. Meanwhile,the schools in the past were not so many and formal. Their teaching condition,
education status and effcts were behind modern counterparts. As you can see,all social class nowadays can receive an high quality education. While in the past,it was difficult for many people to become educated.

Of course,ancient people indeed had less knowledge to learn,so that they could be more focus on their subject. However,from what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that modren people become educated earier than ancient people.

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TPO7 综合
In the reading,the author says that the companies in the United States would not pay much attention to wood certifications. While,the professor in the lectue points out several reasons that they are most likely to adopt this practices 一定要注意这个单复数问题啊·~in the end.

First,the professor talks about the consumers in the United States do pay attention to the advertisments,and they usually distingish单词拼写！ the companies and the indenpended agency when they wacch拼写 TV（后半句我觉得应该加强，这点是听力反驳的重要内容，用个however也行~~）. And,they are willing to trust the indepedended agency with international reputation.Thisisdirectly contradicts what is said in the reading.

Second,the price difference between these two products is less than 5%. Consumers in the states will consider the prices only when the difference is so big,in this situation,they would more like to choose the ecocertfied ones in order to protect the enviorment and to enjoy a high quality环境和质量是除了价格以外看中的地方，写成关心其他，例如保护环境和高质量，这样更加全面，是不~~. So,the price is not a problem relates to the companies to earn ecocertification.
这个顺序说的不对，听力说 人们确实在乎价格，但是如果两个价差在5%以内，那他们就看中别的方面而不是价格了·~你的第一句话不应该以5%作为观点，建议把首句的观点句改一下
Third,the companies would complete interest in 应该是be interented in this practise拼写 not because of the comsumers in the states,but arise from the competeness拼写 of the foreign companies（not only，butalso这个短语后面接的应该是平衡成分，你接的不是哦~~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……）. If the companies in the states do not have this ecocertification as foreign companies,they certainly will loose拼写啦··loose是松了~~要lose哈哈~~ advantages 要复数~~in the home market. Then,foreign companies will corowd into 啥意思？没看懂哦~~是说他们就涌进了市场么？the states.So,even the products are not used to sale abroad,the companies in the states still forced to get the ecocertification in order to compete with foreign counterparts.
写的不错，还是要多注意拼写啦 单复数啦等等
还有就是一定要听到点子上 例如第二点 5%是个小细节，他主要说的是人们不仅关心价钱 还关心别的~而5%是他们的一个类似“心理价”的东东，这个不能作为一个反驳的观点，只是一个小细节~~
加油~~