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6月18日101017 大陆 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to relax by a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. The advances of modern society provide people the convenience to relax themselves,some would like to reading books,which either paper-based or e-book, in their comforale and quiet home,or watch a moive with their family members or friends.While others engage in doing physical exercise such as running or mountain climbing when they want to relax themsevles.Generally speaking,people can relax their stressful mind when they read one interesting novel or watch a funny film,this really help them to relax.While,when they are reading or watching,they just stand still,or in other word,they do not move so much.Then,doing exercise make people healthy,help them contact clostly with the nature, and people then can work or study better in their work or study. By doing physical exercise,people could enjoy a good health.Physical exercise,such as joging or running,help people build up a sound body.Human need some physical to keep health,because they are animals not plants.According to the "evolution theory",if peopel do not use one organ,then the that organ would probability suffers a degeneration process. While doing physical exercise can help people regularly use every part of their body,keep the healthy condition of their organ.One example is that in china,many old people would like to do exercise to keep heathy,an recent survey shows that old people who often do physical exercise have a better health and are less likely to catch a cold or other diseases. In addition,doing physical exercise give people the opportunity to close to nature.Most of the residents now live in the sities,which have little space for the forest,green trees,and wild animals.While some exercies like mountain climbing,long distance running,give people the chance to appreciate the beauty of the nature.One can not imagine the amazing sights of the nature if they do not go there by themselves. Also,doing physical exercise is different from people' daily work,thus,it help people experience a new enviorment and can help people relax both their spirit and their body.One example of this is that,after one day's busy work,I alway running for thirty minutes.I enjoy the feeling of runing on the road,on both sides of which are green grasses and trees,the birds are singing amoung the leaves of the tree.I breath the fresh air,enjoy the beauty of the nuture,and really feel relaxed when I come back to my dorm.Next day,I am in good condition to continue my study.My experience is not rare,many peopel are willing to do physical exercise to release their stress. Of course,some people love reading or wacthing a movie when they want to espcape from their busy daily work.they also feel relief when they do those things.But according to the above statements,I recommend these people do some physical exercise in order to keep health and enjoy the beauty of the nature. -- by 会员 kchszy061ban (2012/6/18 23:17:59)
他人作文: The advances of modern society provides people the convenience to relax themselves, some would like to reading books, which either paper-based or e-book, in their comforale comfortable and quiet home, or watch a moive movies with their family members or friends.这块描述的很详细哦~~好好~~ While others engage in doing physical exercise such as running or mountain climbing when they want to relax themselves . Generally speaking, people can relax their stressful mind when they read one interesting novel or watch a funny film, this really help them to relax. While, when they are reading or watching, they just stand still,vor in other words, they do not move so much. Then,这应该用个转折比较好吧~~however, doing exercise make people healthy, help them contact clostly想说closely吧~~with the nature, and people then can work or study better in their work or study.
By doing physical exercise, people could enjoy a good health. Physical exercise,such as joging or running,help people build up a sound body. Human need some physical to keep healthy, because they are animals not plants. According to the "evolution theory",if peopel do not use one organ,then the that organ would probability suffers a degeneration process. While doing physical exercise can help people regularly use every part of their body,keep the healthy condition of their organs.One example is that in china,many old people would like to do exercise to keep heathy,an recent survey shows that old people who often do physical exercise have a better health and are less likely to catch a cold or other diseases.这个例子可以举得细一些,比如他们早晨锻炼啊,有的跟着音乐跳舞啊~~等等等的~~最后结尾再来个小总结
In addition,doing physical exercise give people the opportunity to close to nature.Most of the residents now live in the sities,which have little space for the forests,green trees,and wild animals.While some exercies like mountain climbing,long distance running,give people the chance to appreciate the beauty of the nature.One can not imagine the amazing sights of the nature if they do not go there by themselves.这不要用双重否定,一直都肯定就好了
Also,doing physical exercise is different from people' daily work,thus,it help people experience a new enviorment and can help people relax both their spirit and their body这一个观点跟前面的1和2有重复吧.One example of this is that,after one day's busy work,I alway running for thirty minutes.I enjoy the feeling of runing on the road,on both sides of which are green grasses and trees,the birds are singing amoung the leaves of the tree.I breath the fresh air,enjoy the beauty of the nuture,and really feel relaxed when I come back to my dorm.Next day,I am in good condition to continue my study.My experience is not rare,many peopel are willing to do physical exercise to release their stress.这段的例子和题目联系的很紧密~~但是论点要好好想想,跟身体上的那个例子,也就是第一点重复了~~
Of course,some people love reading or wacthing a movie when they want to espcape from their busy daily work.they also feel relief when they do those things.But according to the above statements,I recommend these people do some physical exercise in order to keep health and enjoy the beauty of the nature. 文章的小错误很多,例如拼写,复数等 而且有个问题,你没有说清楚为什么运动是一个很好的休闲放松的方式,你一直都在说运动的好处,但是他是怎么跟放松联系到一起去的呢?这个没有直接说明~~ |
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