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2.25 独立 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.
From my perspective, I think that where we live can have a little influence on how good we take care of our families. However, the most significant factor is our love and caring for our families but not our locations.(恩,我看网上很多都说最好开头第一句话不要就说自己观点)
On one hand, people living in rural areas may have a large opportunity of living with their parents and have more time to take care of their families than those living in urban areas. Since the urban life is more colorful and busy, people in urban areas may spend much more time on works or entertainment(entertains), which leads them to have less time to stay with their families. As we all know, the best way of taking care of one is to stay and communicate with them. We human beings are social animals, so we need our families' accompany to bring us sense of belonging. But unlike people in rural areas, people in urban areas seem more independent and indifferent, so the intimacy within families may be lower in urban families. Moreover, due to the housing problem in urban areas, it's difficult for big families to live together in the same room. Childrens may live far away from their parents, leading to the inconvience of taking care of their parents. In contrast, family members usually live together in the same big house in rural areas. As a result, it's more easy for people in rural areas to look after other family members. For example, if the old father has emergency in the evening, his children living in the same house with him can bring him to the hospital immediately and take care of him afterwards. Thus, the locations can somehow affect the convenience of taking care of family members.(这一段都像是在论述应该住农村,考虑到文章的主题,个人觉得这段应该论述的是农村和城市各有利弊)
On the other hand, the most improtant factor on how well we take care of our families is how much we care for them. If one is not considerate and filial, he will not take good care of his family no matter where he lives, no matter how close he stays with his family. Take my uncle as an example, although he works and lives in the metropolis, Shanghai, he still cares much for his parents who live in rural areas far away from Shanghai. He calls them every night and asks them about their daily lives, their health and so on. Also, although he is so busy that he can't come back to his hometown frequently, he sents some healthy drugs and food to his parents every month. From my uncle's example, I want to convey that if we really care about our families, we can conquer the influence of many factors, such as distances and time, and take good care of them. Instead of our locations, our attitude towards our families counts the most. Our families members can feel about our caring if we really put our family to the priority.(这段超赞)
To sum up, no matter we live in urban areas or rural areas, we should not use location as an excuse for not taking care of families. Instead, we need to conquer all the obstacles and care for our families as much as we can. |
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