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枯藤昏鸭

topic：

Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?

When faced this question that people should choose friends who are different from themselves or choose friends who are similar to themselves. People always face the dilemma to choose the idea that people should make friends different from themselves or choose friends who have the same kinds of themselves interests. Quite a few people believe that making friends different from themselves will bring more benefits. On the other hand, some people might choose making friends who has the same type as themselves. According to personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, I prefer to make friends different from myself. Because there are too many benefits that outnumbers its disadvantage.

There are numerous reasons why I choose the idea that people should make friends who are different from themselves. And I would here explain a few of most importance ones. The essential reason can be seen by most people is that they will give you a different way to look the world. Friends who are different can introduce you to foods, music, politics and books you have never tried before. If you are a unplanned kinds of person, someone who is more scheduled can help you get better organized. You, on the other hand, can help them loosen up a little bit.

Furthermore, to speak frankly, there is one more practical reason that I choose the idea that people should make friends who are different from themselves. Someone who is different from you won not have the same reaction to situations. This is a big help. If you are the kind of person who get very impatient waiting for your meal in a restaurant, it help to have someone calm with you. Your friend can help you keep your temper. If you are a little timid about standing up for yourself, a more assertive friend can help you develop a little more self-respect.

Finally, as a proverb say, “everything has two sides.” Also I admit that there are a couple of advantages of making friends who are similar to you, such as you can share some enjoyment and do something you are both interest in. I still think that the advantages of this idea not more than the advantages of idea of having friends who are different from you.

Taking into account all these factors, we will find that the benefits of making friends who are different from you outweigh the having friends who are similar to you. Therefore from we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that having a lot of acquaintances who are different and a few close friends who similar to you is the best choice.

beautywawa

個人拙見，我建議樓主在中間段，可以改變一下順序，使主要的論點突出，畢竟這招是騙電腦的。論點越明顯，評點分數越高。

枯藤昏鸭

怎么改法？

beautywawa

呵呵，我很爛，請教NN吧

pengstone

以下是引用枯藤昏鸭在2005-3-19 8:20:00的发言：
topic：

Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?

When faced this question that people should choose friends who are different from themselves or choose friends who are similar to themselves. People always face the dilemma to choose the idea that people should make friends different from themselves or choose friends who have the same kinds of themselves interests. Quite a few people believe that making friends different from themselves will bring more benefits. On the other hand, some people might choose making friends who has the same type as themselves. According to personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, I prefer to make friends different from myself. Because there are too many benefits that outnumbers its disadvantage.

There are numerous reasons why I choose the idea that people should make friends who are different from themselves. And I would here explain a few of most importance ones. (Put these to the end of your first paragraph.)The essential reason can be seen by most people is that they will give you a different way to look the world. Friends who are different can introduce you to foods, music, politics and books you have never tried before. If you are a unplanned kinds of person, someone who is more scheduled can help you get better organized. You, on the other hand, can help them loosen up a little bit.

Furthermore, to speak frankly, there is one more practical reason that I choose the idea that people should make friends who are different from themselves. Someone who is different from you won not have the same reaction to situations. This is a big help. If you are the kind of person who get very impatient waiting for your meal in a restaurant, it help to have someone calm with you. Your friend can help you keep your temper. If you are a little timid about standing up for yourself, a more assertive friend can help you develop a little more self-respect.

Finally, as a proverb say, “everything has two sides.” Also I admit that there are a couple of advantages of making friends who are similar to you, such as you can share some enjoyment and do something you are both interest in. I still think that the advantages of this idea not more than the advantages of idea of having friends who are different from you.

Taking into account all these factors, we will find that the benefits of making friends who are different from you outweigh the having friends who are similar to you. Therefore from we have discussed, we may safely come to the conclusion that having a lot of acquaintances who are different and a few close friends who similar to you is the best choice.