OG13 SC19 include的主语可以是人吗？

nevercry

19.A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg

A. A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly's exploits included
B. The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
C. Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
D. Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly's exploits are
E. The pioneer journalist's exploits of Nellie Bly included

我想问的是C选项中，OG说NB做主语，即NB include 是错误的。请问NN们，人可以做include的主语吗？
以前看到一个句子： I include the theory in my book. 不记得在哪里看到的了，就是感觉很顺口。请问是错的吗？

这个问题好像没人问，是因为太简单了吗？我可是鼓足了勇气才敢问的，请各位大牛帮忙看看。多谢了。

benjaminsandro

当然可以
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/include#Verb

灵狩Icy

你举的那个例子里，include可以衍生成“收录”的意思，就是“我把这个理论收录进我的书里”。所以实际上这个include的真实主语也不是人，而是那本书。

nevercry

benjaminsandro 发表于 2015-4-24 13:48
当然可以
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/include#Verb

可是，og的解释说，C的选项中，The wording of this version is illogical because it makes Nellie Bly the subject of the verb including.N.B.做主语不可以吗？

nevercry

灵狩Icy 发表于 2015-4-25 20:38
你举的那个例子里，include可以衍生成“收录”的意思，就是“我把这个理论收录进我的书里”。所以实际上这 ...

那在C选项中，OG说，The wording of this version is illogical because it makes Nellie Bly the subject of the verb including.为什么不可以看做是N.B."收录"呢？

灵狩Icy

nevercry 发表于 2015-4-26 17:03
那在C选项中，OG说，The wording of this version is illogical because it makes Nellie Bly the subjec ...

Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the globe faster than Jules Verne's fictional Phileas Fogg.
如果你把这句话翻译成收录的话就变成了“NB是一个在在自己的英雄事迹中收录了blablabala。。的pioneer journalist。”
首先它的句意重心就变了，相当于这个答案把整句话的意思给扭曲了。原句本意是想强调他得某个事迹，至于NB是什么人只是一个客观描述一笔带过。
第二你不觉得如果自己收录自己的英雄事迹很奇怪么？实际上这个事迹是外人给他寄了一笔，而不是他自己做的，所以不能把NB当成include的主语。而是他的某个事迹被included了。

I include the theory in my book. 这句话里的include是说我“主动”将理论收录到书里，所以I可以做主语。或者也可以写成The theory is included (by me) in my book.理论被我收录进我的书里。

nevercry

灵狩Icy 发表于 2015-4-26 18:45
Nellie Bly was a pioneer journalist including in her exploits the globe faster than Jules Verne's  ...

嗯，看懂了。多谢大神~

rafferty_

nevercry 发表于 2015-4-26 17:03
那在C选项中，OG说，The wording of this version is illogical because it makes Nellie Bly the subjec ...

同学，做SC有一个基本原则就是根据句子的逻辑。根据意思，句子的逻辑主语不是那个人，而是他的exploits，是说他的功绩包括什么东西。所以，include的主语应该是功绩。