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topic o you agree or disagreewith the fellowing  the statement ? people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing.usa specific reasons andexample to support youwanswer.
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I agree with the philosophical idea that one should do things we do not enjoy doing. However, because in modern society, abundant chances, which could give us promotion, is those things we do not favor to do.

I know that for myself, I was nominated to hold the national competition, while the chairman appointed a boy who I did not like very much, to cooperate with me. I came to exchanged idea with chairman and wanted to changed one, my favorite friend, which was not admitted by chairman. After a long to get along with the boy, finally, I found though working with a boy with different character, sometime the different ideas could meet some conflicts, by communication and exchanging points, we can elaborate a good method for solving problem.

On the other hand, you may find when you achieved a task we do not like to do, which could bring us great joys and cultivated ourselves. Take the preparing TOEFL examination as a example. It is really a tough work to listen to the TOEFL Listening Test, for most of us can not able to suit to the speed in speaking. And sometimes, we must memory ample American idioms, even we do some dictation which costs us abundant time. But after long time practice, surprisingly to find, we can not only fellow the fast speaking speed, but also we can use the American idiom freely: not only do we hear clearly, but also speak freely, which bring us great sense of achievement.

As a general rule of thumb, it is impossible for us to judge things from their facades, sometimes which mislead us. Simply by trying it, we may decide we like it. For instance, we hate dancing. We come to club only to please others, which was considered to waist our ample spare time we can use to do some valuable and meaningful things. By these, which contribute to our temperament and the increasing interests make our life significant. The same can be true of trying some new food or going to live other country to the different culture.

All in all, doing things we do not enjoy doing sometimes has a reliable indicator that it can cultivate ourselves and create better chance to communicate with others. So frankly speaking, it is on earth a part of our life!

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以下是引用biologist在2005-2-16 16:03:00的发言：
topic o you agree or disagreewith the fellowing  the statement ? people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing.usa specific reasons andexample to support youwanswer.
Sample TextSample TextSample Text
I agree with the philosophical idea that one should do things we do not enjoy doing. However, because in modern society, abundant chances, which could give us promotion, is those things we do not favor to do.

I know that for myself, I was nominated to hold the national competition, while the chairman appointed a boy who I did not like very much, to cooperate with me. I came to exchanged idea with chairman and wanted to changed one, my favorite friend, which was not admitted by chairman. After a long to get along with the boy, finally, I found though working with a boy with different character, sometime the different ideas could meet some conflicts, by communication and exchanging points, we can elaborate a good method for solving problem.

On the other hand, you may find when you achieved a task we do not like to do, which could bring us great joys and cultivated ourselves. Take the preparing TOEFL examination as a example. It is really a tough work to listen to the TOEFL Listening Test, for most of us can not able to suit to the speed in speaking. And sometimes, we must memory ample American idioms, even we do some dictation which costs us abundant time. But after long time practice, surprisingly to find, we can not only fellow the fast speaking speed, but also we can use the American idiom freely: not only do we hear clearly, but also speak freely, which bring us great sense of achievement.

As a general rule of thumb, it is impossible for us to judge things from their facades, sometimes which mislead us. Simply by trying it, we may decide we like it. For instance, we hate dancing. We come to club only to please others, which was considered to waist our ample spare time we can use to do some valuable and meaningful things. By these, which contribute to our temperament and the increasing interests make our life significant. The same can be true of trying some new food or going to live other country to the different culture.

All in all, doing things we do not enjoy doing sometimes has a reliable indicator that it can cultivate ourselves and create better chance to communicate with others. So frankly speaking, it is on earth a part of our life!

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