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gzl840414

Easier to prepare food improve the life ,do you agree?

Talking about preparing the food, it will recall me of the different pictures of cooking food between my mother and grandma. The big difference is the speed, my mom is much faster than my grandma to prepare the meal. But if you ask me which one is more delicious, it is really a question to me. As the society is developing, i agree that the easily prepared food improves our life a lot.

First, it is very convinent for us to cook the food which are easily prepared.As we know , one should reach many conditons for cooking in the past.Take my grandma for example, she must start the fire first,  wash the vegetables and meat, then fry or boil them.The whole process reqires a long time usually.In contrast,it is possible for my mother to buy the clean food in the supermarket, and cook them in the microwave cooking machine for a litter while.

Besides, easily prepared food especially some fast foodcassures we can have a meal everywhere, everytime.It meets the need of the workers' short rest between their jobs, and the hungrey children can eat some fast food by themselvies before the tired parents go home.It benefits our life so much  through the development of the technique that makes the quick meal become reality.

But on the other hand, there are a group of people who may argue that the quickly prepared food is not as nutrient as the long prepared food.It makes sense when we point to the fast food, like humbur and fried chicken.But not all the easily prepared food are like them, as salad is very good for our healthy,And some expertises say the long-cooking may destroy the vatamine or other valuable essence in the food in the view of biology.

To sum up, the easily prepared food adapts to the fast living style in the modern society, improves our life dramatically.

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标题修改一下吧。谢谢。

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以下是引用gzl840414在2005-2-14 18:57:00的发言：

Easier to prepare food improve the life ,do you agree?

Talking about preparing the food, it will recall me of the different pictures of cooking food between my mother and grandma. The big difference is the speed, my mom is much faster than my grandma to prepare the meal. But if you ask me which one is more delicious, it is really a question to me. As the society is developing, i agree that the easily prepared food improves our life a lot.

First, it is very convinent for us to cook the food which are easily prepared.As we know , one should reach many conditons for cooking in the past.Take my grandma for example, she must start the fire first,  wash the vegetables and meat, then fry or boil them.The whole process reqires a long time usually.In contrast,it is possible for my mother to buy the clean food in the supermarket, and cook them in the microwave cooking machine for a litter while.

Besides, easily prepared food especially some fast foodcassures we can have a meal everywhere, everytime.It meets the need of the workers' short rest between their jobs, and the hungrey children can eat some fast food by themselvies before the tired parents go home.It benefits our life so much  through the development of the technique that makes the quick meal become reality.

But on the other hand, there are a group of people who may argue that the quickly prepared food is not as nutrient as the long prepared food.It makes sense when we point to the fast food, like humbur and fried chicken.But not all the easily prepared food are like them, as salad is very good for our healthy,And some expertises say the long-cooking may destroy the vatamine or other valuable essence in the food in the view of biology.

To sum up, the easily prepared food adapts to the fast living style in the modern society, improves our life dramatically.

I think the structure is good. But if you put it in WORD, you can find a lot of topys....At least you need to correct these first.

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