帮忙改句子

require

the establishment of sth will be able to attract more population to come here.the increased population will带来,,,,,的坏处.

如果不对,要表达如此,改如何?

fbfamous

错误确实有：

1，be able to 的主语是人才对

2，人口是population我想你说的是人，而不是人口。因为你说的是come here，人口就不太合适这么说可吧。另外more修饰人口有问题了。population不可数

其他的还没找到啥问题，要改的话也很简单：

the establishment of sth can attract more people to come here.

require

as far as I am concered,simple,right,classical!