OG13 SC 92 的D选项

pixysun

搜索到的帖子都在问both，这个我懂了，可是D选项也会出现语义理解错误诶！Composer后没有逗号（曼哈顿SC 83页写了需要逗号隔开的），有可能让人理解为两个人，一个是Jazz pianist，一个是composer TM。求解！！

92. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
(A)  Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B)  Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C)  Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
(D)  Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
(E)  Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

leohhy

the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington的核心词是tradition，后面的and只是连接两个定语of WS和of DE，这里不存在两个核心名词，所以用both无论如何搭配不出平行的结构。
ABE因此排除；
C前半句没有谓语，因此无法yet引导的句子平行。

只剩D了。

pixysun

leohhy 发表于 2014-10-19 14:28
the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington的核心词是tradition，后面的 ...

Thank you all the same!!!
用排除法确实能排到只剩D，但是我比较想了解的是其背后隐藏的GMAC规则，感觉这才是刷题的关键目的。我琢磨了一下午，感觉为什么D对，应该是因为其他的都不好，同时后面那句中的 “he”点明了这里只有“一个人”。
今天下午按照Manhattan SC的分类把OG 13 parallelism的题做了一遍。发现另外还有一道同时parallelism的题是这种感觉，52题。题目的解释也是：因为后面一句是"She",所以为了并列，前句的主语更好是Jasphine rather than Paris。 对应的唯一的答案也是类似的赶脚。但是因为后面这句这个“She”，所以算得上5个中最effective的答案。