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cnblufan

题目  In order to celebrate important events such as graduation or a special birthday, some of them prefer a large party, while some others prefer a small party with only a few close friends and family members.

For many peoele,the event such as graduation or a special birthday is  very important .So It is neccesary to organize a big  party .In my opinion ,I prefer to have a large party rather than a small party.And I will take graduation by example to clarify my views.

   First of all ,the graduation is a meaningful date to be remember because the day is only one in our life.And if we just have a small party,it's not enough to make us expression to the extronary day.On the contrary ,organzing a large party will be memory the special day .there are many instance in our daily life that making a large party or prade to be rember the important day such as boating and eating zongzi on the duanwujie .So having a large party can be meaningful.

   Second ,We can also make more friends though participate the large party.For instance,there are someone you know but you don't filliamr with and maybe on that large party you will have the last chance to conmunicate with him or her in further.Finally ,you are friends in the party.Therefore ,having a large party can provide you with more chance to make friends.

  The last point is that we can improve our capacity by arrange and organize thid large party.Due to finish the party perfectly,We have to  decorate the rooms by ourselves and to corporate with others.Beside those,you as a leader of the party,can show you ability to other persons.And whatever in what aspect ,we can improve ourseleves.

   In a word ,I would like to having a large party to memory my impotant day.

还有就是觉得自己的举例素材匮乏、词汇量匮乏，怎么办

cnblufan

再问一下，一般综合写作和独立写作写多少字数比较好呢