OG13 SC134关于D选项

Sybil_Wang

Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.

(A) fatigue among shift workers, and have raised

(B) fatigue among shift workers, and raised

(C) and fatigue among shift workers while raising

(D) lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised

(E) and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising

我的问题是，不能像D选项一样把‘reduced sickness, sleeping on the job’, 'lowered fatigue among shift workers', 'raised production efficiency in various industries' 三个部分看成平行吗？虽然这样子和C的意思就有点点不同，但是看A的话还是比较容易理解成D的样子。求解啊~~

Sybil_Wang

有人能回答吗~~顶上来啊~~

perrylkt

首先平行的那一部分是一些状态：sickness  sleeping on the job， fatigue among shift workers。加上raised完全不能构成平行因为句子意思都变了。
同时reduced lowered xxx 重复

Sybil_Wang

perrylkt 发表于 2014-9-1 16:36
首先平行的那一部分是一些状态：sickness  sleeping on the job， fatigue among shift workers。加上raise ...

3Q~我明白了~~

yuyuxiao123

而且，如果按照楼主这样理解的话，‘reduced sickness, sleeping on the job’中间也要加上and连接吧，嘿嘿，其实我也不太懂。。。

fmcenji

问题已经解决。

fmcenji

yuyuxiao123 发表于 2014-9-13 09:12
而且，如果按照楼主这样理解的话，‘reduced sickness, sleeping on the job’中间也要加上and连接吧，嘿嘿 ...

不用加，因为并列三者，最后一个加上就Ok了。