千行笔记中第12题:
Rising inventories, when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead to production cutbacks that would hamper economic growth.
(A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead
(B) when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads
(C) when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead
(D) if not accompanied by correspondingly increased sales, possibly leads
(E) if not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, can lead
答案为E。A选项的解释中写道:“unaccompanied意思与not accompanied有重大区别,句意需要的是not accompanied”求解!
unaccompanied is not wrong ,but not accompanied more effectively expresses the intended negation.
另外A选项的重大错误在 correspondingly的错误修饰 这里corresponding所在的位置使它修饰了unaccompanied这个动作
但是作者想要表达的是rising inventories 和伴随增长的sales之间的关系 而不是rising inventories 伴随着 sales的增长